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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

0 posted 2008-09-16 04:50 PM


The street is a supermarket.  
Customers drive up

and down the aisles,
looking at the produce.  

It’s all home grown,
and always extra fresh.  

There’s something
for every taste.  

Everything is super fine,
just stop and have a look.  

Just take a look at the meat counter.
Fresh cut right here at home.  

It’s all so lean and tender.  
They’ll even grind it up for you.

The street is so very accommodating.  
Anything to please the customer.    

Bobby

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Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2008-09-19 05:12 PM


This one made me shudder.  

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
2 posted 2008-09-19 05:47 PM


Thanks dear Nan,

I'm glad this made you shudder.  That means it worked the way I wanted it to.

Thanks for the kind words.

Love Bobby

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