Ellipitical Illusion - (Reshines for 2ndHandDreamPoet)

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Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2008-10-04 12:24 PM

Elliptical Illusion
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Way out across
this velveteen night sky
shy light moon goes passing by
Backstaged her glowing looks so full
yet a crescent appears in magnetic pull
Oh, my eyes do deceive, even a seasoned
moonie like me ~ What a night of confusion
Houdini-God performed an elliptical illusion
Spotlight shines on the edge of this night
but somehow it just doesn't look right
Sheer curtain of half-pulled phase
still she bows so gracefully
in crescent haze

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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The Lady
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since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

1 posted 2008-10-04 01:03 AM

ahhh I'm first poetess

"still she bows so gracefully
in crescent haze"

another of your beautiful moon shaped delights
it's wonderful

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2008-10-04 03:08 AM

the sky is smiling?

and why wouldn't she?

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-10-04 03:15 AM

Marge, as well as an audio-poet, you are a visual poet, par excellence!

- Owl

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2008-10-04 08:37 AM

Thanks Marge!!...fine crescent imagery!

I am especially fond of that velveteen sky and shy-light moon 'elliptical illusion'...

wonderfully moon-'shaped' write!

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-10-04 10:40 AM

Dear Marge, you are our moon-specialist-poetess, what a treat reading this piece so amazingly presented too.

((((Marge)))) be well!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2008-10-04 12:17 PM

Margie Girl, you are pip's ultimate moon goddess and word artist!

Love and healing hugs,
Earthy One

WindWalker
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since 2001-10-12

Posts 1218

7 posted 2008-10-04 12:21 PM

This is a good one!!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-10-04 07:12 PM

Nice Marge...James

Magnus

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since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

9 posted 2008-10-04 07:19 PM

You realize that you have this moon thing
down pat? Way to go MT!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2008-10-04 07:51 PM

So nice to see you Marge!
xo

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

11 posted 2008-10-04 09:35 PM

Oh Marge it is so nice to see you back again
and read your wonderful poetry. I sincerely
hope you are on the road to a complete recovery. I had trouble with my PC a while back and lost a lot of email adresses so please send me another one and I will reciprocate. Love to you dear Lady

Lindsay

Misty Lilacs
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since 2005-11-15

Posts 1060
White Birch Forest

12 posted 2008-10-05 12:45 PM

Hello Ms. Luna Goddess! It is so grat to see you back. I'm assuming you are now at home and that is great news!

And as always, great writing.

ooxx Marti

sewasham
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since 2006-09-11

Posts 714
Oklahoma, USA

13 posted 2008-10-05 01:10 AM

Hi Marge,
Great to see your lovely words gracing these pages again. Hope you are recovering well. Take care and Have fun. Steve

turbulent_melody
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since 2008-10-01

Posts 22
Australia

14 posted 2008-10-05 08:13 AM

Only a lunar eclpise comes close to how wonderful this poem is Marge.

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

15 posted 2008-10-05 12:56 PM

Marge,

You surely do put those words together well. Great write, as always...

BC

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

16 posted 2008-10-07 05:45 PM

shy light moon goes passing by..."

I love everything to do with moons as well Marge~!!!

to you
ARCTIC WIND

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

17 posted 2008-10-07 06:22 PM

Oh Marge, this is so beautiful the way you did
the words in the shape of the moon. The words are
just perfect, also.

BTW, Marge, do you still have your newsletter with your new poems on them? I used to be on it but at the time I had email problems and never did get back on it for some reason? I'm going to your website to see if you have a newsletter still.Love you, Marge.
Hugs and God bless,
Ethel
Some of my poetry links--
Ethel's Creations My Inspirational Pages MySpace Page Ethels Love Poetry

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steavenr
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since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

18 posted 2008-10-07 08:29 PM

now that is just too cool...not only the talent to write a totally mesmerizing piece, and then the added talent to shine in crescent form...awesome

Oklahoma Rose
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since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

19 posted 2008-10-07 09:11 PM

Marge, this is absolutely beautiful.

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

20 posted 2008-10-09 10:04 AM

I remember when you got me hooked on these "shape" thingies. Taunting me again???? LOL

Lovely write and inspiration shining.

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