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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-10-04 06:21 PM


Appalachian Shadow-symphony

Fine sculpted shadows of these
  sunset hills
cross this Autumn twilight river,
on the fugacious edge of Time’s
  perfection.

            --- b. e. adams (10/04/08)


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1 posted 2008-10-04 06:32 PM


The quintessential Zen image.
Take a bow, poet.

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2 posted 2008-10-05 07:06 AM


I am breathing calmly in the beauty of this, dear Bruce. Shadow-symphony, wow!

Love,
Margherita

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3 posted 2008-10-05 08:06 AM


This is a truly magical piece of writing.
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4 posted 2008-10-05 10:22 AM


Most appropriate for the title....
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5 posted 2008-10-05 12:50 PM


secondhanddreampoet,

Yes Sir Poet, please take a bow.. Great words said...

BC

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6 posted 2008-10-07 05:48 PM


Excellent!- I love anything to do with Autumn!!! and my favorite part of sunset it Twilight!


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7 posted 2008-10-07 06:15 PM


Sounds like a beautiful symphony to me!!
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8 posted 2008-10-07 08:26 PM


cool thoughts, cool write, and even had to look up a new word...just hope my retention is not fugacious...lovely imagery
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9 posted 2008-10-09 11:13 AM


Hello Bruce, there is some perfection in your poem too, I enjoyed very much, I don't really know Appalachians, I have just wander In shenandoah...

regards

  yann

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