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gator89
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0 posted 2008-10-08 11:35 PM


"Dumb"

Alone I wait
But nothing comes
The world to hate
But I sit dumb
My body numb

Cause everyday is just a blurr
With fading memories of her
I beg for water
But only drown farther

My only friend
Cast behind me
No hand to lend
Or joy to see
He just won't be

Cause everyday is just a blurr
With fading memories of her
I beg for water
You drown me farther

Alone I wait
But it won't come
Myself to hate
But I'm still dumb
Still I'm dumb

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1 posted 2008-10-09 10:01 AM


I can relate. I have felt dumb before (emotionally and intellectually - never speech-wise, unfortunately for some).

Again, welcome.

A

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