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A wet loo (title changed for anfidel)
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A wet loo (title changed for anfidel) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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We ran out of duckies in Ooltewa (sweet Tennessee) and management had caught a whiff that we had taken in a corpse ingeniously in animate when he knocked upon our door seeking shelter from the storm too drunk to know that we're the eye packing up black clouds with us lassoed from the sky he cussed as we pulled him from the sea so we tossed him from the boat as I proclaimed "Dead bodies float." See ya at neap tide... [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-17-2008 05:39 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno? I don't even know how I feel about this one m'self, but I do know if I take a moment and write it without context, it's a "huh" moment for many. And if I write a moment with context provided, it's argued that it's not *sniff" poetry, but narrative. I'll try to backtrack a bit though, but this one was the one that wouldn't shaddup, so I wrote it.  All this, for you. *cackle* And that was an allusion to what movie? Extra hugs to anyone who catches that.  |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"Big Fish" ? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh man... that's not it, but lovie? I'd give you extra hugs and more any day. Hardly a "prize", am I... I love you much.  That just ain't it. But? and *wink* SEE? I am the Big Easy!!! *cackling* OH. The movie allusion was in the reply to myself. sheesh.  |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Oh man that is funny K! Knowing the story behind this little ditty I have to wonder when the yes in you will learn to say "NO!" to taking in strays? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh Shar... sighing I wanted so much to "pay it forward" that I guess...I dunno--I didn't realize until Ooltewa that I was assuaging my guilty conscience and not helping him. I never know where the line is...  I know you know. I love you too. smoochies |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
you ARE a prize and i will take you and the huggies i will take LOTSSSSSS of them |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am the luckiest woman in the world.  |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. This is good John . |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
wow. Thank you John. Oh hell, (you made me happy) |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
WHAT? i didn't make you happy? she sighs and carries her sock monkey back home |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
oh oh oh... don't be hasty. Y'GOTTA SOCK MONKEY? gleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee YOU WIN!  and *wink* |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
of course i do and 5 uncle remus hard back bedtime story books wanna read to me? very relaxing i love that being read to |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I am much better without a scrip...t.  I'm back to add an edited post script... The fictional guy in this fictional poem just phoned. He's in a behavioral center now, receiving the necessary medical detox, and hopefully, he'll continue on to the rehabilitative care in the structured environment, that I, obviously, cannot provide, neither in fiction nor reality. Love to all. [This message has been edited by serenity blaze (09-17-2008 08:23 PM).] |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
OK, I read this ten times and I am still not sure what the heck happend to the Lasso. You didn't leave it tied on did you? To much fun. |
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