Open Poetry #43 |
Where I Longed To Be |
HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Where I Longed To Be Lost in your eyes Its where I wished to be Affections glowing Our desires flowing free Holding me close Embracing me tenderly In sweet seduction Lips mingling sensually With a tender look A loving reflection I see No need for words Your eyes speak to me Blissful the feeling As I gazed contentedly Snug in your arms I embrace the intimacy Your dreamy eyes Reveals so much to me You take me there Its where I longed to be Hope ©2008 |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Makes one wish to be the disire of your affections. Beautiful. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You rendered the blissful state beautifully, dear Hope! Love, Margherita |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"In sweet seduction Lips mingling sensually" You melted my keyboard Nicely done...lovely write |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Hope that is so romantic as only you could write it. loved it. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I always Enjoy your soft-romantic poetry from the heart HopeS! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When the world disappears outside of the embrace then the embrace is heavenly indeed. Well written and I very much enjoyed. |
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