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HopeS
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0 posted 2008-09-11 08:02 AM






Where I Longed To Be

Lost in your eyes
Its where I wished to be
Affections glowing
Our desires flowing free

Holding me close
Embracing me tenderly
In sweet seduction
Lips mingling sensually

With a tender look
A loving reflection I see
No need for words
Your eyes speak to me

Blissful the feeling
As I gazed contentedly
Snug in your arms
I embrace the intimacy

Your dreamy eyes
Reveals so much to me
You take me there
Its where I longed to be


Hope ©2008


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WTBAKELAR
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1 posted 2008-09-12 11:55 AM


Makes one wish to be the disire of your affections.  Beautiful.
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-09-12 06:32 PM


You rendered the blissful state beautifully, dear Hope!

Love,
Margherita

steavenr
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3 posted 2008-09-16 03:20 PM


"In sweet seduction
Lips mingling sensually"

You melted my keyboard

Nicely done...lovely write

LindsayP
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4 posted 2008-09-18 12:56 PM



Dear Hope that is so romantic

as only you could write it. loved it.

Lindsay

Artic Wind
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5 posted 2008-09-18 10:27 AM


I always Enjoy your soft-romantic poetry from the heart HopeS!


ARCTIC WIND

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2008-09-18 10:33 AM


When the world disappears outside of the embrace then the embrace is heavenly indeed.  Well written and I very much enjoyed.
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