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Akiane Kramarik |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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Long night gestures engage boring it's imagination like blue facades of ocean water wolf tones of dimensions running down my chin summertime uncoiling delightful Irish songs peripheral vision with dimpled smiles releasing infinite energy teaching me silence with a voice bigger then the world so I knead & bake sage of memory stuffing insulation into the walls of my home for the next cold night which rues it's woe surrogated talisman who teaches the secret art of emotional growth brushes and colors abducting grey beards drawing a sea of thirst in rich sauces that place moon dust in my nightshirt prolific in supply undeniable connect touching the mysterious head of fruit scented quietude I defy instinct and unleash my mind a grab bag of multidimensional reiki hands painting an intimacy of ghost worlds chronicals of Akiane Kramarik http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TZSGK5lvYMY |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Your words always just flow so smoothly down the page. I loved your verbage in this and the way they lead the emotions that rest between the layers throughout. Wonderfu as always. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
thanks so very much Mark for your warm critique...your very kind...but I'm wondering...how come you don't write much any more? Your a marvelous writer! |
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TheAnonDavid Member
since 2008-08-28
Posts 237UK |
I was admiring the cavalcade of words pouring down my screen when I fell over the following line; so I knead & bake It was the & that stuck out like the proverbial sore thumb. Sorry for being so pedantic over what, in every other way, is a work of such wonders. Do not go gentle into that good night. |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
LeeJ - Thank you so much for your words and the link. Amazing - both of them! Hugs Helen |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo LeeJ, You are becoming an expert in stream of consciousness writing. I’m curious to know, is that what you are trying to do? Love Bobby |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Whilst the whole poem is my favourite part, teaching me silence with a voice bigger then the world struck me with your wordbrush the most. I have seen that video before. If I am not mistaken, it was via you - along with another poem? this poem? but I couldn't find this poem in my Lee folder, so perhaps it was via somebody else, but I really think it was you. She is an amazing child in every way, though a few years older by now. Thank your for another rich experience. - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Lee, I sure have missed reading you! I loved so many parts of this. Since I work with massage therapists during the MD Renaissance Faire, I have become a believer in Reiki. "I defy instinct and unleash my mind a grab bag of multidimensional reiki hands painting an intimacy of ghost worlds..." My computer is running too slow for youtube this morning and will ty and link to it later this evening. Thanks,  M |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Awesomely rich words, dear LeeJ. Yes, Akiane is amazing. Wonderful. Love, Margherita  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
TheAnonDavid Hey there! Thanks for taking the time to read... Helen...no, I beg to differ, YOU are amazing...keep writing Robert...I don't know how or why or what I am writing, it just comes out...thanks for your eyes Owlsa Yes, I to have seen it before, and I don't remember if it was me or someone else? but I love her entire culture. She is amazing. Thanks so much for your comment Nakd...I have missed you as well, sure is good to read you and others again.... Hope all is well with you and yours huggies to you to hun Margherita...yes she is, and so is your writing...please keep writing, always...thanks so much for your kind comment and for taking the time to read. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Whatever you are thinking and doing fills my eyes with pleasure. Your poetry intrigues me. A |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
If I could find a word to say what I think of your poetry it would be ‘Amazing.’ No, ‘Beautiful.’ No, ‘Stunning.’ No, ‘Astonishing.’ No, ‘Indubitably Spectacular.’ Ahhh… I just can’t find the words to say how much I love your poetry! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Always, you move the reader into realms far beyond 'self. This piece carried me somewhere spiritual. Not to a religious pinnacle....but definitely spiritual. Thank you for the link to Akiane, I had not heard of her. Her artistry is incredible. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I'm so glad this floated back to the top - I've been doing my best to catch up on my reading! Karilea |
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