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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. 
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I was bringing everything together welding at work with tungsten invincibility and stainless steel intentions my pocket vibrated “Huge disappointment. there’s nothing else to say.” and I felt guilty again so I burned myself on purpose on my still hot stainless steel intentions. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Viking_metal, Don't burn yourself. And be careful not to breath too much inert gas. That Argon can turn you funny. Bobby |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I've read this a few times, and I know that I love it. There's more that I think, but the implications of divulging that would say more about me than the poem. *winkie blush* You've got an interesting style, here. Love it.  |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Robert- You're awesome. Serenity- I wub you. Whatcha thinkin'? Tell me tell me tell me.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
 My interpretation wouldn't pass guidelines.  I wub woo too.  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This is a very unique poem, VM. I like it. Ida |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Thanks guys! This poem seems to have stirred up more commentary than any other..... HMMmMmMMMmmm..... -P |
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