Open Poetry #43 |
rapacity |
Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
rapacity the voice portrays a woman's character which permeates each executed expression with pretensions of aimed captivation thus his heart and soul excuses rapacity Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
if I understand this like you meant this, this is an exceptionally powerful write...like your word usage in this one...well done |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
steavenr I think you do "get it." It is a play on the theme of the Siren. (or any woman with a purpose I suppose) A siren's goal is to capture the man with her mere utterances, thus the man then can easily excuse his selfish, excessively greedy desire to possess her. Thank you for taking the time to read me and respond. always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
And thus... he is held captive. You have a way of doing that! I like that about you. It's so nice to see you here Janette. If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
We haven't met! ~Enjoyed the Write ARCTIC WIND |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Larry C - you always leave the dearest or most surprising responses, which makes it so fun to hear from you, thanks. And ... [HUGS] back at you, too. Artic Wind - how-do-you-doody to you too, and nice to meet you. And many thanks for the clapping! Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Janette - you write with such exquisite taste, and much meaning with these words... BC |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Bill - "exquisite taste" Oh! I do so enjoy the flavor of your response ... thank you ... I shall savor it. *wink* Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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