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Open Poetry #42

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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2008-03-04 02:37 PM

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The morning lawn
Is covered with dew

To the East
The sky is pink and blue
The first birds
Have begun to sing

The day not yet
Immersed in other things
One drifts with a mist
About to disappear

Lambently touching
The surface of subjects
No one other than you
Is particularly interested in

The faces of those
No one other than you
Ever sees

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secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

1 posted 2008-03-04 02:43 PM

I find the following to be particularly fine:

"To the East
The sky is pink and blue
The first birds
Have begun to sing

The day not yet
Immersed in other things
One drifts with a mist
About to disappear"

Applause!

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

2 posted 2008-03-04 02:44 PM

Drifted with the poem. It is beautiful, dear John. Have a wonderful day!!

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2008-03-04 05:08 PM

Very beautiful, John.
Ida

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-03-05 03:08 AM

Yes.

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