Open Poetry #42 |
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Letter to the Wind |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! ![]() |
Letter to the Wind an old road disappears into the forest-heart of Nature, passing only into deep winter and a distant dream, it is there I post a letter to the wind. --- b. e. adams (3/1/08) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, You made me smile with this one. You've earned the "He Made Bobby Smile" medal for the day. Wear it with pride. Bobby |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
![]() Oh yes...this is a FINE write!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"You've earned the "He Made Bobby Smile" medal for the day." ~ All other replies that you would receive would be downhill from there! lol Might I just take a stab at it and say, "BRAVISSIMO" ![]() ![]() Linda |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
the forest-heart of Nature,....." Very lovely Bruce! ARCTIC WIND |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Did you sign your name? ![]() beautiful poem as always. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Some say, we should never travel backwards. The wind will take all dreams forward. Well done. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
The wind will sing your lovely words to those who know how to listen. Ida |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I love this Bruce! ![]() Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
It doesn't get much better than receiving the "He Made Bobby Smile" award for the day, and it's well deserved. This is a fine write. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
quote: And in posting this, you blew me away... Bruce, there is nothing more I can add that has not already been said...John |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Extremely captivating, dear Bruce! ... and the wind carries your voice with grace. love Margherita ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
really fine stuff! |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
All I can do is ditto the other replies and that's what happens when one is "late". |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you all for your 'comment/reply' posts on this 'write!'... that title has been 'bouncing around' in my brain-attic for WAY too long...finally, I think I found the 'poem' to fit it?! |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
This poem is a pleasure to revisit. Poet, you may just have outdone yourself with this write. |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, I could have sworn that I responded to this poem. I guess I was tired - this is incredible. It might be my favorite of yours - it's hard to say, but I do know this. I am saving it. Lovely, my friend. Simply lovely. Alison |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Must agree with the others, of yours that I have read, it is my favourite. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yeah ![]() this strikes a cord... ![]() excellent! |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Letter to Wind Would you go knock on that door (on one’s heart)? Would you go through that opened window to wake him up (from his dream)? Would you wipe away the useless pages and the dust (of the past) ? Would you tunnel out the condensed emotion? Would you deliver the sound of tomorrow? Would you now bring back the spring? |
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