Open Poetry #42 |
Oh the higher society |
baohan New Member
since 2008-03-01
Posts 5Hochiminh City, Vietnam |
Originally, this was called Funny, but I don't think that it fits this anymore. OH THE HIGHER SOCIETY! The door flung open as she comes in Her figure was tough, tall and thin Vintage dresses covered her pale skin And that’s because her surname is McFlynn… Showing no respect, she’s being loud Making her way, straight to the crowd Sweat from her skin, splits from her mouth She’ll get what she endowed… For all the beautiful people She’s a bit of a pimple But they wanted to keep it simple So it’s better to not jump in someone’s tongue… The next time she arrived There was a big fuss They must have two feeling: She’s appealing or is just disgusts And that’s what funny about the higher society…*sign* |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
yap. Judgmental, Judgmental, Judgmental based vanity. Good poem!!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP! ARCTIC WIND |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Although we are countries apart, I have seen this person in my lifetime Well done, and welcome to Passions In Poetry too. |
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