Open Poetry #42 |
Felix Doesn't Stand A Chance |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Butch and Wawa are older than Felix. Felix is a tiny twelve. Butch and Wawa sometimes do bad stuff, like midnight thieving. Because he’s so small, Butch and Wawa see advantage in making friends with Felix. They get the child hooked on cigarettes. Felix’s Mom thinks Felix looks cute, with a weed dangling from his lower lip. Felix’s Mom never was a bright and shining intellect. Felix doesn’t stand a chance. Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just curious~~~ so where is Felix today? M |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
M, Felix still lives right here in the hood. Bobby |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well I am glad that he has made it, because it seems he really has had a very hard life with very little nurturing. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Nakedthoughts, The hood raises and nurtures its own. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: It was your answer to nakedthoughts that really says so much and got my attention, dear Bobby! There are implications that truly touch the heart. Love. Margherita |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
Worried. Troubles must be coming!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, As Hillary Rodham Clinton named her book “It Takes a Village”--it really does. Our hood has had its successes, and its failures in raising our children. One thing that never goes away though is the fact that all our children are loved, and cared for in our own rough fashion. No matter where they go, or what they do, they are always welcomed home to the hood. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
LadyTom, Yes, your premonition is correct I'm afraid. Stay tuned. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You are right, Bobby. When you don't have anything else you are lucky to have "the hood." I hope things will be okay for you and Felix. I fell a special connection to the two of you. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, Thanks for the kind words, and lovely thought. Felix and I are doing very well, right here in the hood. We both hope that you are doing well too. You have a kind heart. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this poem very nice flow -Juju |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Juju, Thank you for the very kind words on this poem. Go Head Tori Amos. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Reading the comments I see that things probably turned out okay for little Felix. |
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