Open Poetry #42 |
Almost Ready |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Almost ready to say goodbye There's no need to cry We both knew this was coming, saw it long ago It's time that we both just quietly learn to let go The end has come, we both know it's true I know the reasons just as well as you The past five years have made me both happy and sad Please know though, that not all my memories are bad I remember the first time I met you Your soul spoke to me so true Remembering the countless nights I watched you play piano soft and light When it came down to the end though, I have no more fight So go gently, my friend, I wish the best for you Do not let the teardrops cloud your eyes of blue One day you will thank me, for setting you free Some things are simply not meant to be In times you feel down, and like you can't go on Remember this love was not all wrong We were each other's soft landing, and that is more than okay Now go softly, the light will lead the way My gf (of the past five yeras) and I have decided mutually to part ways. It is for the best though, so don't be sad for me. This too is part of life and as all things do....shall pass. Take care everyone! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Very poignant melancholic write, dear Aimster, but with a mature attitude, that will help healing. love and hugs Margherita |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Aimster, This is pretty good. You make good use of end rhymes. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Amy This is a lovely tribute to a relationship that is coming to an end. It shows that the love really doesn't end. Alison |
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marcel Senior Member
since 2003-03-02
Posts 660az, usa |
wish we all had the well intentioned heart, that cares even when the love is gone....... |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This is a worthy poem describing a relationship coming to an end. |
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