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Stargazer16
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since 2008-03-02

Posts 4
VA, USA

0 posted 2008-03-02 09:57 PM

                    LOVE = FUSION

Suppose the almighty (whatever that may be) were to choose a girl (woman) and take certain bits of her and send them racing out into the Heavens where they swing around some way distant stars and then return again to earth, in their own sweet time, showering down where some dummy (boy---) (also chosen in a similar manner), somehow receives those bits over time, unaware how important those bits would be some day, though never forgetting some of them, sees her some Glorious day and begins knowing those bits and pieces are all come from her to him exclusively and specifically to create a powerful desire to be with her?  So wouldn't the Companionship that might be Created between them have the potential to...................?

                  Mission of Mercy

         What is a Man that She would need
        What is the Call that he should heed
        To Serve, to protect her every whim
        This is why She didn't wait for Him

Alison

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since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-03-02 11:18 PM

Stargazer,

Welcome to PiP.  It's nice to read your first post here.

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Mission of Mercy

         What is a Man that She would need
        What is the Call that he should heed
        To Serve, to protect her every whim
        This is why She didn't wait for Him

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This is lovely. Very lovely.  I love the explanation and your thought process behind your poetry.

Again, welcome.

Alison

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2008-03-03 08:28 AM

welcome to PIP!

I enjoyed this first piece. I'll be looking for more!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2008-03-03 12:16 PM

Stargazer,

Welcome to Passions! Interesting thoughts,
so I'm looking to reading more of your works.

Please, check your email
for a Very Special Greeting!

" It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
~*~
KRJ

LadyTom
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since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-03 01:48 PM

A very warm welcome to this wonderful blue land.

Enjoyed your lovely poem.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-03-03 05:19 PM

Welcome To pip!

ARCTIC WIND

Stargazer16
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since 2008-03-02

Posts 4
VA, USA

6 posted 2008-03-03 08:16 PM

Thank you all who viewed and responded to Poem #1, still working on the next posting.

N. L. Weber

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