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Flawless sound
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Flawless sound |
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MindBodySoul Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 196NJ |
“I love you“…. Such a flawless sound… The promise of a tomorrow A view into a future with nothing but happiness Throughthick and thin… For better or for worse… Till the end of time… How foolish we are at times To believe that such wordsare real When we hear them… We feel no fear No insecurities No imperfection No of anything We just float into an unknown world of “LOVE” How can we be so sure As to the depth, the meaning How do we reassure ourselves that love istrue If actions speak louder than words Then why do we need to hear them Why does the mind needit If the body feels it And the soul connects to it What if… the body no longer feels it And the soul no longer connects to it… And you no longer hear that flawless sound… Doesthat mean the dream is over? That the promise of a tomorrow has faded into the unknown That you no longer have a companion And you stand alone once again Or have we stood alone all this time But was just lost in that flawless sound Until we realized one day That flawless sound wasjust passing by for a temporary fix… Jen--->MindBodySoul |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Good job Jen, you summed all of us Love junkies up perfectly here, we all need a regular fix..... John |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed your thoughts on love...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I did too, I enjoyed your thoughts! ARCTIC WIND |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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f13rc373n4c17y Junior Member
since 2005-06-01
Posts 22Maryland, USA |
I enjoyed reading this too. the mind is a complicated matter; it allows us to question an existence of something as you have done, oh so beautifully, here. haha, now the hard part, answering your wonders of questions, because love is an individual thought, no matter what angle you look. |
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