Open Poetry #42 |
For An Unknown Man |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I wonder less now but still if I could fall in love again, I don't pay much good will to all these handsome men. I've got too much on my plate to be snacking on the side, and I sure don't need the extra weight, heavy are those tears I cried. When I decide that I am done with everything I need to do, I may stop and settle under the sun, the ton of bricks of you. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Passing shadows, Hey, I like this one. I got a kick out of that ton of bricks. Bobby |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
when you are ready is soon enough... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When I decide that I am done with everything I need to do, I may stop and settle under the sun, the ton of bricks of you. Dixie girl, I admire your poetic skills and your determination here. Love and hugs. Margherita |
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LadyTom Member
since 2008-02-29
Posts 353LA, CA |
very good. enjoyed |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...timing and preparation are important...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Excellent metaphors, little one. I love the new strength you've found within yourself. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You're getting wise with the 'passing' of the years! Life would be a lot easier if that were true for the rest of humanity! Linda |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Dixie... when it happens again you will know loved this! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I love how your sense of humor peeks through. You are the best. A |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I like this one Dixie |
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