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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-02-26 08:01 PM

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Sick on my journey—

I wander only
Under autumn leaves


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TomMark
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1 posted 2008-02-26 08:23 PM

Are you really sick or only in the poem?
A very sad poem though.

One by one
it flies off green wish
winter smiles
Robert E. Jordan
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2 posted 2008-02-26 10:24 PM

Huan Yi,

Not too bad.  Of course, Basho's the man.

Bobby
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