Open Poetry #42 |
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Felix The Tourist Attraction |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Ten year-olds Felix, Butch, and Wawa are diving off the end of Penn Treaty Park pier, down the end of Shackamaxon Street, in our slummy hood. They’re diving into the filthy, sewage infested waters of the Delaware River. A tourist bus drives up, emptying it load of curious people on to the pier. The tourists traipse on out to the end of the pier. They throw shiny quarters out, and watch Felix, Butch, and Wawa dive for them. The kids can see the quarters in the murky waters. The kids shove the quarters in their mouths— something like a piggy bank. They surface and wave to the tourists for more quarters. The kids take time to notice, a hungry glint in some of the tourist’s eyes. *Authors note: This took place fifty years ago. The Delaware River has been cleaned up, making it safe for would be present day Felix, Butch, and Wawa to dive for quarters there. Unfortunately, the pier was struck by an errant barge several years ago. It has never been rebuilt. Now the kids have to go all the way up river to Pulaski Park to dive in the water. No tourists go there, so no more quarters. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You and your friends truly did live a different reality than most of the kids today. Your's and the gang's experiences have provided much grist for your poetic mill!!! ![]() Linda |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Some of the things you did in your childhood remind me of my own. This is one of them. My brothers and I, and our friends, hung around some places that would be unthinkable today. I guess you had to be there. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
A children's world is so different from the world in the eyes of adults. No matter what. have fun, Felix. ![]() |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Earth Angel, Well, no--the neighborhood reality hasn’t changed all that much here. The kids still swim in the river, and get into pretty much the same things as we did. It's an ancient place, as places in America go. It’s a generally poor, and sometimes wild place. Billy Penn signed his treaty with the Indians there in 1682. That happened just down the street at Penn Treaty Park, under a massive Elm tree. The tree is not there anymore, but it’s remembered. Of course, I still live here. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-23-2008 05:40 PM).] |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Ida, I'm pleased that you can relate to this story. That makes me feel good. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Tom too, Oh, I don't know. Some of us just never grew up. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...reminds me of when I was a boy living in Kentucky at 705 Dresden Avenue, one street over from the Kentucky Derby...when the big races were running we would charge for parking in our neighborhood in front of our neighbors houses...we would tell them we would keep an eye on their cars...it was a safe neighborhood...James |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
James, You rascal, shaking down the tourists like that--aren’t you ashamed of your self—GO FOR IT! Tourists are easy, arn't they--and that's the way it should be. Bobby |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What an interesting story. It's great the river is cleaner, but sad the pier is gone. As for quarter-tossing-tourists, what they did was treat Felix et al like performing seals. In your presentations, you never fail to give the Felix's of the world the respect they deserve as humans. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
now that sounded like a fun day Bobby for Felix and his gang... hope they didn't end up with bad ear infections or anything like that from the murky river! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A wealth of history in your neighborhood! Thank you for your interesting and informative reply! ![]() Linda |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A pity that the water was murky, otherwise it would have been such a pleasure for Felix! Among the better memories I am sure. Thank you dear Bobby for another interesting piece of the story! love Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Midnitesun, I love your response to the poem. It made me laugh out loud. Now let's see, what kind of noise do seals make? Arf Arf Arf? I know it's something like that. Your comment made me blush, thanks for that. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear RDB, It's funny you should mention ear infections. I've been troubled with ear infections for years now. I don't really hear that well, because of them. Felix and his gang were always catching something from that river--and it wasn't fish. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Earth Angel, I'm glad you came back to this. BTW, That treaty was never broken. That is where Philadelphia picked up it's nickname--"The City of Brotherly Love". Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Dear Margherita, Thanks Hon. It still was loads of fun for Felix, and the gang. It was a wonderful time. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Midnitesun, Please let me add that Felix is a dear friend that I have know for many years. He's now retired from all that, and drives a cab here in Philadelphia. Yes, he went through hell as a child. It didn't leave him bitter. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (02-23-2008 11:45 PM).] |
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Alison![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
The kids in my area used to steal the beer coolers of the tourists when they were out fishing. I guess kids are pretty much the same everywhere. Rural or city kids seem to have a way of getting what they need (or want). A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Alison, What a good idea. I'll pass that on to Felix. Kids are kind of the same everywhere. Thanks for digging this one up. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
I found this interesting. |
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