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Something vast
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Something vast |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 from http://hubblesite.org/ * Something vast stirs within me. Invisible hands marshal far away streams of cosmic energy to flood my heart as a limitless ocean. I’m an overflowing vessel urged to spiral in sudden need out of this room into open space where light speed freeways wait. Your Spring voice incites me to dance, soaking my veils in your fragrance. The floodgate breaks and love magma shoots forth supernova like. Hot fluids gush over you, making you stop out of the blue, wondering about the persistent calling of secret passion routes. Revealed by unknown sender, you tuck this inundation into the vastness of your soul, where you can dip your heart fingers anytime. No need to carry a shield of recognition, for I will forever know the source of my desire and find my way to your core, just by riding the sparks of your smile. * |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Margherita, This shows a lot of imagination, and excellent use of the language. I enjoyed it loads. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Bobby! The "flooding" was very real, I feel the "flow of energy" through my chakras and yes then ... I FLY! My motto is "Keeping my feet firmly in the air!" (my way of surviving ...) hugs Margherita  |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
the energy you have shown in the writing is breath taking. i know the feeling. hence you are speaking of me. i am adding this to the library. clever talks delay friendship! |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
Margherita, This is so mature piece of liberal verses, that makes me dream |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you Poddar, I'm happy you FELT this one! Thank you Fareed, enjoyed your comment! Dream on, as a Poet needs to do! love Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Maga Margherita, my dear soul sister, I am saving this faster than you can say "cosmic dynamism"!  I have tucked so many of your treasures into my personal trove of poetic gems, that you will soon be charging me. ~ but that would be okay, because they are all worth it. In fact, if they were compiled into books of poetry, I would purchase all of them! ~ Seriously speaking!  Sounds like your birthday was stellar! lolLove to you, Senorita Margherita Angelo Terrestre  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Margherita! I really love this one sooo much! off to the library you go.. ARCTIC WIND |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your mind is limitless, as is your poetic heart. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Ahhh... Pisces imagination, none like it. I so love that last line. Ida |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So many of your poems have involved the loveliness, and mystic, of what all we do not know of space. And you bring your thoughts to the core of it all. Brava! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..you do the sky of sighs so lovely, enjoyed this |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful!!! Love, Eric |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I had written already a reply to each of you, then the whole text disappeared as I had put several (too many) smilies in it. Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr … so there will be only the final smile, this time. Dear Linda Angel, soul sister (I love that, yes), thank you so much for the loving words. We are each other’s fan, that’s great. As for the books, I am sure you will publish before me, you have so much wonderful material, also for children! Looking forward to this. Dear Arctic Wind, thank you for saving it in your library. You please me. Dear Kathleen, thank you so much. We all do have limitless minds, but sadly we are not always profiting from this beautiful truth. Dear Ida, thank you, yes I love to fly along with my Pisces imagination! Dear Karilea, thank you for your very special comment! Dear DS, thank you so much for coming in here to read. Dear Eric! Thank you for the gift of coming back! It’s such a joy. Love Margherita |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
No need to carry a shield of recognition, for I will forever know the source of my desire and find my way to your core, just by riding the sparks of your smile. oh I love this Margherita!!!! love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice....James |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wonderful writing my friend. LOVELY |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you dear Roniece, dear James and dear Donna for telling me you liked it. Enjoyed your replies. love Margherita |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Margherita, you do radiate with love and joy! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Earl, thank you for unearthing this one and for your loving reply. I am surprised myself about the energy here after rereading it! Love, Margherita |
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