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Margherita
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0 posted 2008-02-23 08:02 AM





from http://hubblesite.org/

*

Something vast
stirs within me.
Invisible hands marshal
far away streams
of cosmic energy
to flood my heart
as a limitless ocean.

I’m an overflowing
vessel urged to spiral
in sudden need
out of this room
into open space
where light speed
freeways wait.

Your Spring voice
incites me to dance,
soaking my veils
in your fragrance.
The floodgate breaks
and love magma
shoots forth
supernova like.

Hot fluids
gush over you,
making you stop
out of the blue,
wondering about
the persistent calling
of secret passion
routes.

Revealed by
unknown sender,
you tuck this
inundation into the
vastness of your soul,
where you can dip
your heart fingers
anytime.

No need to carry
a shield of recognition,
for I will forever
know the source
of my desire
and find my way
to your core,
just by riding the sparks
of your smile.
*


© Copyright 2008 Margherita Rueger - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 2008-02-23 08:29 AM


Margherita,

This shows a lot of imagination, and excellent use of the language.  I enjoyed it loads.

Bobby  

Margherita
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2 posted 2008-02-23 08:32 AM


Thank you dear Bobby! The "flooding" was very real, I feel the "flow of energy" through my chakras and yes then ... I FLY!

My motto is "Keeping my feet firmly in the air!" (my way of surviving ...)

hugs
Margherita

poddarku
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3 posted 2008-02-23 08:39 AM


the energy you have shown in the writing is breath taking. i know the feeling. hence you are speaking of me. i am adding this to the library.

clever talks delay friendship!

Fareed
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4 posted 2008-02-23 08:45 AM


Margherita,

This is so mature piece of liberal verses, that makes me dream

Margherita
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5 posted 2008-02-23 09:06 AM


Thank you Poddar, I'm happy you FELT this one!

Thank you Fareed, enjoyed your comment! Dream on, as a Poet needs to do!

love
Margherita  

Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-02-23 11:13 AM


Maga Margherita, my dear soul sister, I am saving this faster than you can say "cosmic dynamism"! I have tucked so many of your treasures into my personal trove of poetic gems, that you will soon be charging me. ~ but that would be okay, because they are all worth it. In fact, if they were compiled into books of poetry, I would purchase all of them! ~ Seriously speaking!

Sounds like your birthday was stellar! lol

Love to you, Senorita Margherita

Angelo Terrestre



Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-02-23 11:15 AM


Very Lovely Margherita!

I really love this one sooo much!

off to the library you go..

ARCTIC WIND

ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2008-02-23 11:28 AM


Your mind is limitless, as is your poetic heart.
Marchmadness
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9 posted 2008-02-23 11:59 AM


Ahhh... Pisces imagination, none like it.
I so love that last line.
                                Ida

Sunshine
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10 posted 2008-02-23 12:03 PM


So many of your poems have involved the loveliness, and mystic, of what all we do not know of space. And you bring your thoughts to the core of it all.

Brava!


Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2008-02-23 01:32 PM


ms mar..you do the sky of sighs so lovely, enjoyed this
Ericc
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12 posted 2008-02-23 04:12 PM


Beautiful!!!

Love,
Eric

Margherita
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13 posted 2008-02-23 07:01 PM


I had written already a reply to each of you, then the whole text disappeared as I had put several (too many) smilies in it.  Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr  … so there will be only the final smile, this time.

Dear Linda Angel, soul sister (I love that, yes), thank you so much for the loving words. We are each other’s fan, that’s great. As for the books, I am sure you will publish before me, you have so much wonderful material, also for children! Looking forward to this.

Dear Arctic Wind, thank you for saving it in your library. You please me.

Dear Kathleen, thank you so much. We all do have limitless minds, but sadly we are not always profiting from this beautiful truth.

Dear Ida, thank you, yes I love to fly along with my Pisces imagination!

Dear Karilea,  thank you for your very special comment!

Dear DS, thank you so much for coming in here to read.

Dear Eric! Thank you for the gift of coming back! It’s such a joy.

Love
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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14 posted 2008-02-24 04:31 AM


No need to carry
a shield of recognition,
for I will forever
know the source
of my desire
and find my way
to your core,
just by riding the sparks
of your smile.

oh I love this Margherita!!!!     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

JamesMichael
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15 posted 2008-02-24 06:06 AM


Nice....James
Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2008-02-24 08:39 AM


Wonderful writing my friend.  LOVELY
Margherita
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Eternity
17 posted 2008-02-24 03:41 PM


Thank you dear Roniece, dear James and dear Donna for telling me you liked it. Enjoyed your replies.

love
Margherita

Earl Brinkman
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18 posted 2010-10-13 05:38 AM


Margherita, you do radiate with love and joy!
Margherita
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Eternity
19 posted 2010-10-13 10:12 AM


Dear Earl, thank you for unearthing this one and for your loving reply. I am surprised myself about the energy here after rereading it!

Love,
Margherita

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