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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The sun rises And sets The moon Carries on Wind and rain Over rock and stone Seasons change Until the end Of time Slowly A great silence Is growing inside . |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
The sun rises And sets The moon Carries on Wind and rain Over rock and stone...." Lovely Describing Words! ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, This poem is nicely done. Be careful of that "great silence". Never be silent. Rage on. A little adagio can be nice at times however. Bobby |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
 Truly John, one of your finest pieces. I enjoy the brevity of your writes. The sign of a true poet is when they can convey so very much with fewer words. Exremely well done, sir! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
This poem speaks volumes, John. Nicely done. Ida |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
oh, silence speaks more. |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Silence grows like grass through sidewalk cracks. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine 'write!' [the ending in particular] |
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