Prodigal Son's Brother (Part1)

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simon
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since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

0 posted 2008-02-14 12:50 PM

I know it's not like you two to do things by half
But have me hunt and kill the fattest calf?
To be the centrepiece of the biggest feast
That this town has ever seen?
And you're going to invite everyone you've ever known
And sit amongst them all like the King and Queen enthroned
And just because my brother's coming home?

Oh yeah,
There's going to be no expense spared,
A free bar, we're going to feast on whole roasted suckling sows
With apples in their mouths
And there's going to be entertainment
Like musicians and magicians there and
A whole load of acrobats and various other circus acts
All vaulting and somersaulting through the air.
And all this for someone who said they didn't really particullary care.
Who went off to seek his fortune elsewhere.

Now he's coming back without a penny to his name.
Someone who always played you like you were a game
Who only ever called you up when he needed you to give him something
And always knew you'd end up giving it and in to him.
What about me...?

To Be Continued...

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-02-14 01:21 PM

Simon

This is very good, I look forward to the next instalment.....

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2008-02-14 02:41 PM

Yippee! Another one of your creative, imaginative tales! I already am enjoying this period piece! I'll be looking out for Part II.

Giving you a big smile and a Valentine's Day hug,

Linda

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

3 posted 2008-02-14 07:57 PM

Simon,

Get over it bro, and enjoy the party.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-02-15 01:13 AM

I'll be watching for the rest of the story.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-02-17 08:45 AM

Well yes that one is indeed tough to understand from the brother's point of view ...
Well done!
Bringing this one back to associate it to the second part ...

love
Margherita

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

6 posted 2008-02-17 09:38 AM

i love this

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

7 posted 2008-02-17 09:49 AM

yea, this is very good.
enjoyed.

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-17 12:08 PM

I really liked this piece!

Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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