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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Let them live your life Who will die your death— No takers . |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Exactly! Oh, you nailed that one!  |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, Probably not. Everyone wants to do their own thing in that reguard. Bobby |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
The best romantic poem that you have ever written. Extremely poetic. This reminded me of a letter I got looooooong ago that almost said the same thing. I did not understand then while my friend was so moved and cried when she read it. But in reality it has never been like this. Life is never poetically perfect but more poetic than poem. [This message has been edited by TomMark (02-13-2008 09:48 PM).] |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I don't know what took me so long to search for more of your posts...I will definitley be stopping by more often. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
awesome |
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shyvl Senior Member
since 2008-04-11
Posts 531texas, usa |
Told truly in your usual light handed style. Loved it. sharyn |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
great truths mingled with great words...excellent write |
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