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Dessert |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Dessert The festive ruffle of a maid’s apron Scant, the flour sifted Worked in an artisans touch Sensibilities aroused as midnight lifted Turned softly to scallop, and filled Sweetness, an adjective in many flavors Pure thoughts, provoked to be hot Free lance, the drizzle of desire Layers melt away, this taste at Eden’s fire My serve, tempting just the concave nook Each bud, whispers back the sampling it took A rose, hand dipped until the blossom glistens pink Set out in moonlight, at the fire’s brink The last drop, remaining lower lipped A taste, oh just a taste was sipped Before the powdered sugar showered As this is just dessert! Copyright Kkh 2/13/08 |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
this poem needs more careful attention from us. good writing. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
You have whetted my appetite & left me hungry for more....excellent |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A poetic tasty treat! Sumptuous writing! May all your desserts be just!   EA |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is well written. I love the imagery here. K |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Always good poems. |
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