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moon into subconsious wilderness
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moon into subconsious wilderness |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india 
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Into Subconscious wilderness He knew he was of the wild. Never told anybody, Not to his mother, in dream. Not to the girl from town Who once said him, crazy child! At heart he knew he was wild. When moon of blood shone on The porch of his residence He impelled to drink the dark Greens and deep jungle of truth. Like a sharp tooth moonshine fell On entire world of sanity. He knew someday he had to Run away into deep deep Wilderness that lied beneath Our day and night of minds. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Poddar, this is one fine and deeply captivating poem! I love this leap into the beyond of everything known ... or sanity! Margherita  |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Pod Almost zen like in it's imagery.....good write. |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Love the way you paint pictures with words... |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
thank you all. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Very Beautiful, my dear friend. Indeed a wild child. |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Intense imagery... I especially liked this: ..."He impelled to drink the dark Greens and deep jungle of truth. Like a sharp tooth moonshine fell On entire world of sanity."... A remarkable chill came through me...as I smelled the damp, dark jungle night! Awesome! |
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