Open Poetry #42 |
give me the moment... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
wrap me in your arms holding as though it were healing let the world slip away give me the moment of just feeling ….you allow me the sanity of breathing you in committing to memory sensation of skin hold me…just hold me as though time is of no consequence this need I have for you ….much too intense press a little tighter feel my heart beating hear the rhythm softly repeating… I love you...I love you…I love you ~SEA~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Sigh . . . so very beautiful, Sea. It warms the cockles of my heart to read such a deeply happy poem. - Owl |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
feel my heart beating hear the rhythm softly repeating… I love you...I love you…I love you Such lovely thoughts... I enjoy your posts immensely. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A very beautiful heart tune! A moment lived intensely emanates energy that lasts forever ... Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
fantastic...James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ Soooooooooooooooooo lovely ... and I love the 'spoons' photo~ Ah ... too tender~ Hope this one doesn't get 'forgotten' down here ~ I'll try to give it a pleasant little if I see that happen~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Susan, this is beautiful, tender, and very very romantic. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Susan, that is such a sweet sensual poem that touches the heart strings. Well done my dear. Lindsay |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you've captured the feeling of me and Kevin in this love it! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
you guys are the best, thank you so much for your kind replies |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
So beautiful a moment beautifully captured. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this gave me chills (the good kind) your words just float across a page. your picture of love leaves me with a huge smile on you my face! much love to you! The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
let the world slip away give me the moment of just feeling ….you.............." A sweet sensation! ARCTIC WIND |
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