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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2008-07-08 11:55 AM

wrap me in your arms
holding as though
it were healing
let the world slip away
give me the moment
of just feeling
….you

allow me the sanity
of breathing you in
committing to memory
sensation of skin

hold me…just hold me
as though time is of no consequence
this need I have for you
….much too intense

press a little tighter
feel my heart beating
hear the rhythm
softly repeating…

I love you...I love you…I love you

~SEA~

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2008-07-08 12:21 PM

Sigh . . . so very beautiful, Sea. It warms the cockles of my heart to read such a deeply happy poem.

- Owl

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

2 posted 2008-07-08 12:28 PM

feel my heart beating
hear the rhythm
softly repeating…

I love you...I love you…I love you

Such lovely thoughts... I enjoy your posts immensely.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-07-08 05:34 PM

A very beautiful heart tune!

A moment lived intensely emanates energy that lasts forever ...

Love,
Margherita

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2008-07-08 07:38 PM

fantastic...James

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-07-08 07:47 PM

SEA~
Soooooooooooooooooo lovely ... and I love the 'spoons' photo~
Ah ... too tender~
Hope this one doesn't get 'forgotten' down here ~
I'll try to give it a pleasant little if I see that happen~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2008-07-08 09:01 PM

Susan, this is beautiful, tender, and very very romantic.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

7 posted 2008-07-08 09:07 PM

Oh Susan, that is such a sweet sensual poem

that touches the heart strings. Well done my dear.

Lindsay

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2008-07-08 09:09 PM

you've captured the feeling of me and Kevin in this

love it!

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

9 posted 2008-07-09 10:16 AM

you guys are the best, thank you so much for your kind replies

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

10 posted 2008-07-09 09:05 PM

So beautiful a moment beautifully captured.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

11 posted 2008-07-10 06:23 PM

thanks

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

12 posted 2008-07-25 04:59 PM

this gave me chills (the good kind)
your words just float across a page.
your picture of love leaves me with
a huge smile on you my face!

much love to you!

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2008-08-05 10:53 PM

let the world slip away
give me the moment
of just feeling
….you.............."

A sweet sensation!

ARCTIC WIND

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