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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2008-07-07 04:44 PM





Loving you

it was a part of me
long before I ever knew
what love was

~A feeling of urgency,
not understood
a certain something
clearly missing
that I could not
identify
only feel....
anticipate~


I remember
the moment I knew….
pieces falling into place

the moment
my eyes
found you


~SEA~

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Margherita
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1 posted 2008-07-07 05:47 PM


What a tender, yet passionate statement! The heart's wish to last forever.

Very beautiful!

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2008-07-07 05:54 PM


nice
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3 posted 2008-07-07 06:24 PM


"a certain something
clearly missing
that I could not
identify"

This is an evocative piece of writing. I know the feeling well but from the opposite perspective, having lost a part of me I thought would be mine forever. An abyss beside your pinnacle.

amusemi
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4 posted 2008-07-07 06:49 PM


Cool write!  
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2008-07-07 07:39 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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6 posted 2008-07-07 07:44 PM


Very tender, Susan.
That photo speaks volumes.

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7 posted 2008-07-07 07:57 PM


Woo-woo!  Love it!
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8 posted 2008-07-07 11:54 PM


this is lovely!

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I never let one moment define me, I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02  

SEA
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9 posted 2008-07-08 08:45 AM


thank you all very much
passing shadows
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10 posted 2008-07-08 09:01 AM


how romantic! You've made me smile!
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11 posted 2008-07-08 09:09 AM



Dear Sea, you must really be in love. This was yet another absolutely beautiful write. I loved every part of it.

The lady in the picture looks just like my grandmother, who with along with my grandfather lived to be 92 and 87 respectively.

They were married together for almost 70 years.

Keep them coming dear poet.

Rich

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12 posted 2008-07-08 04:07 PM


Aww, this is a beautiful love at first sight kind of thing :-) it gives hope for those of us who have not quite 'found' our match.
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13 posted 2008-07-08 07:42 PM


this is golden, Sue.

(and I just had to have that photo too, so I um, "lifted" it.)

very touching, you!


SEA
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14 posted 2008-07-09 10:15 AM


thanks you guys

and K? Isn't that the sweetest picture?

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15 posted 2008-07-09 09:15 PM


Beautiful, beautiful! Yes, tender, passionate, and well matched with the cutest possible picture. Yay!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

SEA
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16 posted 2008-07-10 06:24 PM


thank you!
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17 posted 2008-07-25 04:55 PM


hey girl!

well I am back posting.
I wanted to comment on your work...
beautiful as always! you have the ability
to always find the words that reach within the soul and holds on.

I miss you. Sorry I've been out of touch.
Drop me a line if you get a chance--
you know my e-mail.

Amy


The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

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18 posted 2008-08-05 10:53 PM


Love is great, isn't it!


ARCTIC WIND

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