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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 Loving you it was a part of me long before I ever knew what love was ~A feeling of urgency, not understood a certain something clearly missing that I could not identify only feel.... anticipate~ I remember the moment I knew…. pieces falling into place the moment my eyes found you ~SEA~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
What a tender, yet passionate statement! The heart's wish to last forever. Very beautiful! Love, Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
"a certain something clearly missing that I could not identify" This is an evocative piece of writing. I know the feeling well but from the opposite perspective, having lost a part of me I thought would be mine forever. An abyss beside your pinnacle. |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Cool write! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very tender, Susan. That photo speaks volumes. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Woo-woo! Love it! |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
this is lovely! ~~**~~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all very much |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how romantic! You've made me smile! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Dear Sea, you must really be in love. This was yet another absolutely beautiful write. I loved every part of it. The lady in the picture looks just like my grandmother, who with along with my grandfather lived to be 92 and 87 respectively. They were married together for almost 70 years. Keep them coming dear poet. Rich |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
Aww, this is a beautiful love at first sight kind of thing :-) it gives hope for those of us who have not quite 'found' our match. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this is golden, Sue. (and I just had to have that photo too, so I um, "lifted" it.) very touching, you!  |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks you guys  and K? Isn't that the sweetest picture? |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Beautiful, beautiful! Yes, tender, passionate, and well matched with the cutest possible picture. Yay! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
hey girl! well I am back posting. I wanted to comment on your work... beautiful as always! you have the ability to always find the words that reach within the soul and holds on. I miss you. Sorry I've been out of touch. Drop me a line if you get a chance-- you know my e-mail. Amy The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. Eden Ahbez |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Love is great, isn't it!  ARCTIC WIND |
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