Open Poetry #42 |
Arm Ache |
Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
There's an angel in the churchyard With his hands in the air. He has held this hallelujah For a hundred years Ushering us to heaven With marble veneer. Today I struck up his pose For what you might call a dare For 2 minutes 16 seconds I held it there And wondered how long it takes. Now my hands just dangle And they wont let me in the pearly gates, Because my arm shakes. Hello Pippers. this is my first post. xxx |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, welcome to Pips. Shake'em loose, hope for the best. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Cute first post, Spudette. Welcome to PIP. Hope you can still write. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Spuddette, This is a nice poem. It's great to see you here. I really like your handle. Bobby |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Spuddette, Welcome to PIP. You have a nice writing style. Enjoyed. ~Jill |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree...LOL....very well done... j. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You should be ok. It's when you are ornery like me that it becomes doubtful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Thankyou for the warm welcome folks. You seem like a nice crowd. Janet xxx |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
welcome to passions. i like the thoughtfulness and humour in this piece |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions, Spuddette... a lovely write, and a belated Welcome! Please check your email for a Very special Greeting! " It matters not this distance now " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Oh. Thankyou very much. That was very thoughtful of you. xxxJan xxxx |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I believe I have never read you're first post! WELCOME TO PIP Enjoyed your first post! ARCTIC WIND |
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