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When Truth Settles In
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When Truth Settles In |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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When Truth Settles In The sky begins to settle in doubt dissolving the lines of the untitled where the silence becomes fear in a tired mind. The feelings are vanishing before the touch of hope can reach out and leave its tattoo upon a heart in waiting. The mask disguises the truth as the storm begins to rage and seed the thoughts with endless feelings from that last kiss. The rambling thoughts metered to captivate, to entice, to gratify are surrendering to more than just a day at the beach... when the truth settles in. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thank you for this Nakedthoughts, this one really hit home. Rich |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
feelings are vanishing yes I know that well nothing last forever I guess good writing M |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The feelings are vanishing before the touch of hope can reach out and leave its tattoo upon a heart in waiting" I really really liked all of this, but this part got me...  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Maureen, your feelings are very beautifully rendered. Love, Margherita  |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
WOW!! how do you manage to dig so deep within...**smiles** this is simply beautiful m'friend! The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks everyone...I appreciate your responses and Aim~~ so nice to see you here  M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great post Maureen You wtote it well. A big hug my friend. Lindsay |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Lindsay  M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Indeed, Digging deep into the Inner emotions and feelings! ARCTIC WIND |
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cauchy3 Member
since 2008-06-10
Posts 61 |
Sound well and flowing nicely. |
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