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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2008-07-08 09:09 AM



When Truth Settles In

The sky begins to settle in doubt
dissolving the lines of the untitled
where the silence
becomes fear
in   a    tired   mind.

The feelings are vanishing
before the touch of hope
can reach out
and leave its tattoo
upon  a  heart   in   waiting.

The mask disguises the truth
as the storm begins to rage
and seed the thoughts
with endless feelings
from   that   last   kiss.

The rambling thoughts
metered to captivate,
to entice, to gratify are
surrendering to more than
just  a  day  at  the  beach...

when the truth settles in.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Richy
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1 posted 2008-07-08 09:13 AM



Thank you for this Nakedthoughts, this one really hit home.

Rich

passing shadows
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2 posted 2008-07-08 09:18 AM


feelings are vanishing

yes I know that well

nothing last forever I guess

good writing M

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3 posted 2008-07-08 01:46 PM


"The feelings are vanishing
before the touch of hope
can reach out
and leave its tattoo
upon  a  heart   in   waiting"


I really really liked all of this, but this part got me...

Margherita
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Eternity
4 posted 2008-07-08 05:54 PM


Dear Maureen, your feelings are very beautifully rendered.

Love,
Margherita

Aimster
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5 posted 2008-07-25 05:03 PM


WOW!! how do you manage to dig so deep
within...**smiles** this is simply
beautiful m'friend!

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2008-07-25 06:09 PM


Thanks everyone...I appreciate your responses

and Aim~~  so nice to see you here


M

LindsayP
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7 posted 2008-07-30 12:12 PM



Great post Maureen

You wtote it well.

A big hug my friend.

Lindsay

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
8 posted 2008-07-30 05:04 PM


Thank you, Lindsay


M

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9 posted 2008-08-05 10:41 PM


Indeed, Digging deep into the Inner emotions and feelings!


ARCTIC WIND

cauchy3
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10 posted 2008-08-06 08:05 AM


Sound well and flowing nicely.
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