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SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

0 posted 2008-07-07 10:33 PM

You
Terrify
Me.
…no one else has that power over me

my existence
is
because
you
are
…and that truly terrifies me….

knowing
how helpless
I
really am
.
.
.
and knowing
what levels
of desperation
I could be driven to
just for your smile

…what then of this love….

this knowing
an intuition
in heart beats
and that with every
rise and fall of
breaths

.
.
.
.
I love you more
.
.
.
and with that knowing
.
.
you
terrify
me.

~SEA~

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2008-07-07 11:53 PM

I hope this is a good terrify??....as in heart sink and butterflies.....and if not I'm praying.....

~~**~~
I never let one moment define me, I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2008-07-07 11:56 PM

yes, it's good

lol

it's loving someone so much and coming to the understanding that they could destroy you if they chose to...knowing, that you are helpless(emotionally) if they left your life.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2008-07-08 12:03 PM

I have heard it said my dear that a smile is a pathway to the heart so when you

receive that smile make sure you give a bigger one in return. Good luck dear Sea

I'll be pulling for you. Love

Lindsay

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2008-07-08 08:52 AM

Dear Sea, this was amazing.

Very beautiful, I so enjoyed it!

Rich

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2008-07-09 10:17 AM

thank you and thank you!

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

6 posted 2008-07-09 05:08 PM

Ooh! Fabulous! And the way it's presented makes it even better!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2008-07-10 06:22 PM

thank you very much

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

8 posted 2008-07-25 05:01 PM

i know what you mean by "terrify"
you write this sooooooo well. as always
you leave me in awe. i wish i could get
a book of your poems!

The greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love and be loved in return.
Eden Ahbez

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-08-05 10:56 PM

Yeah, At least it's a good Terrify

lol
We don't want it to be a bad one...

The World is a mysterious place huh, Given freewill!

Great Write

ARCTIC WIND

cauchy3
Member

since 2008-06-10

Posts 61

10 posted 2008-08-06 08:02 AM

What terrifly is amusing and good. bless you

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