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Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

0 posted 2008-04-17 12:02 PM

            I walk a whispered wind
          where Spirits of the past traverse
              Calling out to me
          to seek the wisdoms of the universe~

            I chase a rustling wind
         for fear of not having seen
           what it is that the Spirit's
         would have me glean~

           I seek a calming wind
           that sits me down in soft surround
          Gifting me with the knowing
          that where I am, is exactly where
         the whispered wind
               would find my thoughts going~

                   I walk
                 I chase
              I seek
           I sit
         I am found~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

1 posted 2008-04-17 12:09 PM

very clever formatting!

love this!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2008-04-17 12:25 PM

Amazing how the spirits sing to us
when we need them most.

We must never forget to listen
and learn.

Seoulair
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since 2008-03-27

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Seoul S.Korea

3 posted 2008-04-17 12:29 PM

beautiful and soft as wind. love the read.

gilead
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nevada, USA

4 posted 2008-04-17 12:35 PM

What a marvelous poem! The ascending progression of thought lends itself to the very uplifting power of a spiritual wind, and the reader can feel its calming presence . . .

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2008-04-17 12:36 PM

Thanks you four~

AND actually, Seoulair, you inspired me to listen for this one with the reply you left on my 'Find Me ... Find Me' piece~
quote:
Seoulair said -
whispering beauty.

I thank YOU~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2008-04-17 01:40 PM

Oh Margie...you knew that this one would touch my heart.....

Lovely....

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

7 posted 2008-04-17 01:44 PM

a such delightful rerading.

thanks Marge

yann

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

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8 posted 2008-04-17 01:53 PM

Marge...Great write, enjoyed...Paul

Sometime the winds might blow
all our thoughts astray
Then each passing thought
returns to us another day

Winds of time fan the flames
keeping our hearts a glow
Brush the souls of our forefathers
return to us our dreams from where they flow

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Betty
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Virginia

9 posted 2008-04-17 01:56 PM

This is great Marge

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2008-04-17 03:33 PM

Enjoyed...James

shyvl
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since 2008-04-11

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texas, usa

11 posted 2008-04-17 04:11 PM

I loved the repetion and consistency they bound the peice together. It was lovely to read and read again and again. Thanks for sharing
sharyn

Beasley
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Cheboygan,MI USA

12 posted 2008-04-17 04:42 PM

This is so peaceful. Very nice writing.
love, Barb

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

13 posted 2008-04-17 06:33 PM

Thank you ALL so much~

And Paul ?

quote:
Sometime the winds might blow
all our thoughts astray
Then each passing thought
returns to us another day

Winds of time fan the flames
keeping our hearts a glow
Brush the souls of our forefathers
return to us our dreams from where they flow
That is as lovely as inspired write as I've seen ... thank you so very, very much~

*Huglets* to all~
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Trillium

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since 2001-03-09

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Idaho, USA

14 posted 2008-04-17 07:14 PM

Dear Marge:

There is such an aura of mystery about this poem, it is really intriguing!

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28

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Australia, Victoria

15 posted 2008-04-17 10:01 PM

A lovely lovely poem Marge,

Enjoyed by all, keep up the good work.

Love to you dear lady and God Bless.

Lindsay

Larrysmom
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since 2008-04-03

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Florida, USA

16 posted 2008-04-17 10:09 PM

Betty Lou is right, there is mystery to this and it’s beautiful…

Tammy<333

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

17 posted 2008-04-18 08:15 AM

Ah, BettyLou ... you know my whispers well~

Thanks to all of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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HairDark
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18 posted 2008-04-18 04:24 PM

I have followed Margie Tidwell's poetry for some time. This poem as with all of her others flows ever so gently. I am new here and look forward to reading more poetry from the hearts of others.

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

19 posted 2008-04-18 04:50 PM

KATHERINE~
How WONDERFUL to see you here ... can't wait to see some of your BEAUTIFUL poetry here~

WELCOME~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

20 posted 2008-04-19 03:58 PM

Beauty in words Marge!

ARCTIC WIND

Margherita
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Eternity

21 posted 2008-04-20 07:13 AM

Dear Marge, when you listen to the wind's whispers you are truly aligned to heaven's desires.

This is YOU.

Beautiful and inspiring!!

Love,
Margherita

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

22 posted 2008-04-20 04:21 PM

Gentle, lovely poem, I enjoyed it very much.
Ida

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

23 posted 2008-04-20 08:22 PM

You ALl are so kind to this ~Poet~
Thank you~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Alison

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24 posted 2008-04-25 10:53 PM

Marge,

This is a real keeper and touches me deeply. Lovely ~ just lovely.

Alison

Marge Tindal

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Florida's Foreverly Shores

25 posted 2008-04-26 07:57 AM

Alison~
Thank you so very much~
This is the ink of my heart in whisper~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~
~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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Inspired-8
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Pluto

26 posted 2008-05-11 01:29 AM

Profound lovely write my friend: )

Oklahoma Rose
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Oklahoma USA

27 posted 2008-05-11 06:54 AM

Marge, this is just beautiful.You have always had a way with words.

Joyce Johnson

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Washington State

28 posted 2008-05-29 03:25 PM

Dearest Marge,

I knew I would find a poem that fits the situation now. May your whisperd wind bring with it the good health we are all wishing for you and whisper our prayers in your ears. Love, Joyce

Robert Frazier
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29 posted 2008-05-29 03:47 PM

you always speak straight to the heart...beautiful!!!

Hugs,
R

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

30 posted 2008-05-29 06:46 PM

Marge, your poetic voice is that of a whispered wind...

May the Force always be with you.

Love you!
Earthy One

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

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Eternity

31 posted 2008-05-29 07:04 PM

quote:
I seek a calming wind
           that sits me down in soft surround
          Gifting me with the knowing
          that where I am, is exactly where
         the whispered wind
               would find my thoughts going~

                   I walk
                 I chase
              I seek
           I sit
         I am found~

Yes! May "the soft surround" heal you quickly, dear Marge!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

32 posted 2008-05-29 08:33 PM

a most fine 'penning!'

As a 'Universalist,' I am particularly fond of:


" I walk a whispered wind
     where Spirits of the past traverse
        Calling out to me
     to seek the wisdoms of the universe~"

sustained applause!

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

33 posted 2008-08-08 04:08 AM

I seek a calming wind
that sits me down in soft surround

Oh dearest friends, thanks to all who I neglected to thank for the kindness of your thoughts and prayers~

I'll be blown by the winds that move me to a place of calm in total surround~

I wait ... I seek ... I've only to speak His name to know that He is with me~
Oh dear Spirit of the Wind ... let it be now~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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