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Open Poetry #42

Voice overpowers fear

KeyLimeSorbet
Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

0 posted 2008-07-06 03:58 AM

I feel beautiful,
I feel loved.
Nothing can wipe the smile off my face,
cause I know it's deserved.
Years in the dark,
with who I never imagined,
feels the same way.
Not who I want to be with in the moment,
Not even the near future,
but the far.

Every petal on this flower is brighter,
he loves me, I pull a yellow.
he loves me, I pull a orange.
he loves me, I pull a pink.
No questioning.

Love will work in the end,
a thousand miles couldnt hold us back.
One day I will send,
a letter telling you to pack.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-06 05:02 AM

This is a fabulous love story which promises an even happier ending than the joyous moment. Fantastic! I really enjoyed the twist on the petal pulling...

quote:
Every petal on this flower is brighter,
he loves me, I pull a yellow.
he loves me, I pull a orange.
he loves me, I pull a pink.
No questioning.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

2 posted 2008-07-06 06:10 AM

May the petals on your flowers always be odd numbered.

Very inspiring love story.

I wish you all the best!

Rich

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

3 posted 2008-07-06 02:41 PM

This is beautiful.

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