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Open Poetry #42
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Inspired-8
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Pluto
0 posted 2008-07-05 04:32 AM



Comes the ending
Bitter close
This heart’s tending
The hurt it knows
Will there ever
Be  another for me
Try to keep going
And still  to believe
With all the past hurt
Love  shall still  be received

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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1 posted 2008-07-05 04:36 AM

indeed Victor.. love shall be received.. again.   love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........
Inspired-8
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Pluto
2 posted 2008-07-05 04:44 AM

thanks Roniece sent u an email : )
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3 posted 2008-07-06 04:37 AM

Oh yes, there will be another for you.  Just open yourself up to that thought and let the sun shine into your heart and heal it and love will come.

- Owl
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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4 posted 2008-07-06 05:12 AM

Such a common theme that so many can relate to, expressed so poetically. Great read.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
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