Open Poetry #42 |
The Eye Is Willed to See |
scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Rise with the sun in morning's mists. Greet dawn's glory with a starlit smile. In crystal vision see forests and fields. In brilliant clarity hear nature's voice, bird-song, leaf-chime, wind-sough. Hands stilled, breath stilled, thoughts stilled in anticipation, today promises nothing, but living is its own reward. Exist beyond the realm of limited perception is the one true ideal. In my sight myriad images ignite, aflame in fire-wrought dreams, such elusive things, but in truth, the eye is willed to see objects, not reality. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"In crystal vision see forests and fields. In brilliant clarity hear nature's voice, bird-song, leaf-chime, wind-sough." In agreement here, that one should listen carefully to the myriad calls of nature. Welcome to Pipland, scoff. |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Thank you, midnitesun. Yeah, I'm afraid, unless we change our ways, we won't have too many years left in which to enjoy her. What time we have is short, and the small opportunity we have to reverse the damage we've done is being wasted. I've got one more post to make here today, and I think I'll use it to reinforce the point. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful and wise! Welcome to Pip! Love, Margherita |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Sinsane. Sage and insane. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Garapan, Certainly the latter. I can't speak to the former, but thank you for thinking so. |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
Thank you, Margherita. There are enough voices crying out in the wilderness. The whole world needs to listen up. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Enjoyed you wisdom, scoff. Wish there were more people like you. Ida |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Absolutely, yes! THe third and fifth stanza's contain marvelously wise reminders! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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