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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto 
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Taken apart A piece at a time This broken old heart What’s left of it mine Looked in the future Let go of my past Searching for answers Why love never lasts Just more memories In the making What is left for me Love’s always taking Leaving me to bleed |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
new memories await my friend! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Victor.. love is never easy... but I hope you can carry on giving love.. the world needs love... hugs to you my friend.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Our hearts are fragile often, but if you look deeper into your higher self, your soul, you will find that you are always loved and never abandoned. You ARE love. Poignant. Love, Margherita |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
Thank you my three wise wonderful beautiful friends feeling better today : ) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Beautiful poem. Always, hardship enriches us. It teaches us compassion for others in the same or similar circumstances or even others experiencing different hardships. Think of this as a preparation for your next love who may not be your final one, but yet another learning step to create the best person you can be to give to your final one. Never let anyone treat you badly. Teach - indirectly or directly, whichever is appropriate at the time - each person you meet how to treat you - and always treat others with love and respect and dignity, no matter how they treat you, but if your next love treats you badly and won't be taught how to treat you, then she is not the love for you and the kindest thing you can do for both of you is to move on. We always have a choice, no matter the circumstances. Perhaps it is good that you haven't met your final love yet. Perhaps you still need a little more love experience to be the most worthy you can be of your final one. - Owl |
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Inspired-8 Member
since 2008-04-14
Posts 311Pluto |
words of wisdom thank you how prolific my friend! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Wow. I tend to agree with Owl that it is a huge possibility that you are in the learning process for a deeper and more lasting love. I was getting the sense that you were in a post relationship struggle and this poem and your responders confirm it. Best wishes to you for heart healing and a better tomorrow than yesterday. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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