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Edge of the Void
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Edge of the Void |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Edge of the Void This window frames a mountain-moon of permanent immensity as life flickers by, like a reluctant shadow in a broken mirror’s uncertainty, leaving only lingering questions and fleeting time… disquieting companions on the edge of the void. --- b. e. adams (7/3/08) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I felt like I was in the middle of an Outer Limits scene...and enjoying the view. |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
your writing is very unique! enjoyed....  |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
"Like a reluctant shadow in a broken mirror's uncertainty" (My favorite part of this stunning poem). As you would say, Poet. Serious applause. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Secondhanddreampoet, "lingering questions and fleeting time…" Make the world an interesting, and most intriguing place. Thank heavens for them. I like your moon. Bobby |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Was there, my friend, and that's saying a lot. Jimmy |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Yes. A unique writer and very eloquent. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"a mountain-moon" sometimes poet a few words from you will catch my mind and hold it these did excellent poem |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You out of anyone would know about mountains, but the void must be filled~ With happy things... sending some happy your way~ Indiana~  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed there is a sadness here love it! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed!  ARCTIC WIND |
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ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
I keep returning to this poem, coming away with different feelings each time, like looking through a prism and seeing the many facets of life as it changes. This is a finely crafted, well-spoken write. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Captured by the first line "this window frames a mountain moon" - kind of like the moon is captured by the window. Enjoyed immensely! |
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