»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #42
»
Remembering (a 'repost')
| Open Poetry #42 |
|
Remembering (a 'repost') |
|
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
|
Will you remember me?! In the crimson sunrise..... When the world's new promise And all fair dreams arise.... Will you remember me?! In the flaming sunset.... When the world is mellow And all long cares depart..... Will you remember me?! In the spring's first blossom.... When the world renews And all old 'hurts' unwind.... Will you remember me?! In the summer's sunshine..... When the world seems young And all new hopes unfurl..... Will you remember me?! In the Autumn's passion..... When the world retreats And all warm feelings change.... Will you remember me?! In the Winter's sadness..... When the world reflects And all old wounds reopen.... Will you remember me?! --b.e. adams |
||
| © Copyright 2008 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
So beautiful in every sense of the word, Bruce. Who, in their right mind, could forget you? |
||
|
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Very touching, sentimental, romantic! I have had the same thoughts...  ~ARH [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-02-2008 07:14 PM).] |
||
|
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
 I thought these would fit your poem~ |
||
|
gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
The masterful stroke of a well wrought pen, and the whole of life is set before us for all time, for all seasons! The poet has sealed his remembrance in the majesty of his song! I am deeply moved--- Art |
||
|
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Secondhanddreampoet, The thoughts expressed in this are rather universal. Bobby |
||
|
i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
i do not know you personally, but i sure will remember you, through all the thoughts you shared,unselfishly... this poem is really lovely. "omnia vincit amor" |
||
|
Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Bruce... I think... that we all will remember you ... this is exquistely penned.. just lovely .... love RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
||
|
ArtSolstice Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 498 |
I remember reading this for the first time many months ago. Does it make anyone else wonder if writers write to try to stop time? Well penned, and greatly enjoyed. |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
