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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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it never was the value of your words and how they were unraveled really that made my wondering get wheels it was more the quiet after when they were but useless whispers that anyone could have left around some empty bedroom playground when the unwrapping was all done and there was a new christmas coming when I was just that old tree again like the behind the woodshed place for secrets and pull off the road besides just to keep the edges of the lawn smooth ________________ daark |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful Mr Daark.... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"it was more the quiet after when they were but useless whispers that anyone could have left around" This speaks volumes, DS. With a handful of images, you paint a sterile shadow that provides nothing more than fallow ground; so the road appears fertile by comparison. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I sense a touch of melancholy in this one ... but I would say that I would not imagine you ever as "JUST the old tree ....". I would see you as the most majestic tree in any forest  .A wonderfully poetic tree of course ...  Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms r/b thank you woman from down under ________ Ms midnite. Thanks babe, I like what you saw here ___________ Ms mar, more the old christmas tree, but thank you for keeping me green babe. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, this read very sad to me too... just kind of left behind feeling...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...but it's the old trees that hold the most memories... and still, there's nothing useless in a whisper not when it's heard with the heart; unless it was just "anyone".  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms suesea. Not sad stuff ms just changin lanes, thanks babe. ___________ Ms sun1 thanks lady friend for special warmz. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
You be the Obie Wan! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
xgarapan, thanks so much |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D This poem touches me in a similar manner. It's like it reaches beyond the words and lingers to touch at unexpected times. It reads like a beautiful secret, but I think that is part of your style. Do I need to say that I love this? A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Ms ali-san. Thank you lady friend for the touch here. |
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