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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
O I love you more than I can bear, yet I am cursed to live alone, it feels like my heart is breaking beyond repair and as if I am slowly turning to stone, I feel like I am slowly fading away, am I cursed to soon decay ? , or will you take me away. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Hi, Rocky! Welcome aboard the pip ship of kindred spirits!  My goodness, I wouldn't want you to "decay"! ~ But then I doubt that you could ~ because you're a rock! ~ Sorry, I'm in a silly mood today.  I think it is good that you have found us! You can emote and bare your soul and you'll have friend who will listen (read) and understand! Giving you a warm, welcoming pip hug, Earth Angel |
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K-K Member
since 2008-03-13
Posts 153Indiana |
Welcome to PIP!!!!! Great start my friend~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Welcome!  |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Welcome to Pip! When we feel such deep, almost unbearable love for someone, we are not alone at all. Love unites us, even if we plunge into the illusion of being separated. And such a powerful declaration causes strong emotional waves which will be felt by the beloved. Love, Margherita |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
Thank you for welcoming me. I love you, do not fear, for I am harmless and am here do not fear for you my love for you, was is and always will be near. The Love That Never Loses... Sometimes tough love is the only way to get her to love you in return regardless of what it takes. |
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Ray Sharpe Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 112Tenerife |
Welcome Rocky ....you will find there are some lovely people on here ...I have ........keep strong ...love will arrive when you least look for it. Ray |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
Thank you for welcoming me, you're too kind. |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
My love for you is beyond that of the heat of the sun, I love you more than I can bear, my heart feels as if it will fall apart any moment now, I am in love with you but you don't care! I can write better than this but am holding back a little for my thoughts can sometimes hurt those who read them, for my heart was broken by a very great person yet she just doesn't understand, maybe I need to put more of an oppressive sense into my poetry for poetry can go a long way. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Welcome. I hope things work for you. The writing is nice... hope it is helping! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Hello and welcome to our pages blue Rocky... I'm sure you are going to love it here... there is always someone to offer good constructive critiques to your work... I enjoyed your first offering, thank you ... hope to read more of you ... Love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Welcome to PIP, Rocky, you will love it here amongst so many other wonderful poets. A great first post and I loved the rhyming. Lindsay |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to the Passion~ |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
The Power... May my love for you weigh heavily down on your body in chains of truth and passion, just consider me a lustful man that desires no one else but a wonderful woman such as yourself. This poem of mine may sound brutal but I do not intend to harm, only to burden with love. |
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MarkG Junior Member
since 2007-06-21
Posts 48California USA |
keep writing and posting...good stuff...lots of heart...a lot of people know how it feels... Mark |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
They never allowed me to talk to you just because I think you're pretty, always thought they could tell me what to do thought they could separate you from me, all I wanted was to get to know you and tell you how much you mean to me, but I guess I cannot be your friend I guess they hate letting friends like you and me be, I may love you more than a friend would and I may admire you too, but that doesn't mean that they can separate me and you, I love you girl always have and always will, that doesn't mean to have you I'd somebody kill, you're a friend to me and I'm a freind to you, I may want you to love me baby but I cannot and will not tell you what you're going to do like your other friends did and might still do, I love you like a wife, but to me what matters is me and you, you do not love me the way I do you, I love you baby that is why I am not going to tell you what to do. |
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Rocky Junior Member
since 2008-06-12
Posts 25 |
They never allowed me to talk to you just because I think you're pretty, always thought they could tell me what to do thought they could separate you from me, all I wanted was to get to know you and tell you how much you mean to me, but I guess I cannot be your friend I guess they hate letting friends like you and me be, I may love you more than a friend would and I may admire you too, but that doesn't mean that they can separate me and you, I love you girl always have and always will, that doesn't mean to have you I'd somebody kill, you're a friend to me and I'm a freind to you, I may want you to love me baby but I cannot and will not tell you what you're going to do like your other friends ddid and might still do, I love you like a wife, but to me what matters is our lives. |
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