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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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0 posted 2008-06-30 07:41 PM


An obvious intrusion no real surprise.
You could read her body like a book, couldn't read her eyes.
What a day this ain't no way to socialize.
In the corner of my eye I saw her realize

that she had the game.
.......So much for conclusions. Too much to believe.
I was struck with confusion and ready to leave.
I could put off the real world. Her smile did deceive.
And if hearts could be stolen, she was a master thief.

Sensational delusion would have been just fine.
But she shot it down 'fore I could even kill my wine.
Went inside and put my pride right on the line.
Shouldn't drive so fast. I can't afford the fine.

I asked for her name.
.......So much for conclusions. Too much to explain.
She had her way with me, and I couldn't complain.
I thought I knew what heat was till she turned up the flame.
As she left she said checkmate. So much for the game.

Rick Delmonico

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FastForward
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since 2008-06-29
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1 posted 2008-06-30 09:28 PM


Her name is Flip Flop.  

This was a powerful tease.  Good writing.

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