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Love's Sweet Sorrow (2) The Morn Arises
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Love's Sweet Sorrow (2) The Morn Arises |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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~The Morn Arises~  The restless night had not prevented thesun from making a daily journey to morns arising the lace trimmed pillows strewn across the bed still wet from tears she had been crying. She stepped out onto the veranda for breakfast just like she had done on every other morn heavy was her heart from loves sweet sorrow there was no hunger, her heart was torn. Her daily stroll she made past the orchards the aroma of peach hanging heavy on the air she paused to tarry amongst the willows coming to rest in her favorite wicker chair. This had become her tranquil place of mind as though her spirits own private sanctuary it was here that she loved listening to the wind and lonesome sounds of a passing ferry. Willow trees bending over touching the ground reminded her of angel tears falling from the sky but this day they were not the tears of angels it was her own tears the willows did now cry.  © dmsmith |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
**sigh** ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oh! Beautiful! I hope there is going to be a third one, where he comes galloping back (on the same horse, please?). - Owl |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
X thank you. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Owl sweetie, there are a few more installments and I shan't ruin that surprise for you. I am pleased that you enjoyed hon. Hugs. ~D |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
it was here that she loved listening to the wind and lonesome sounds of a passing ferry. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ We all make our peace and find it in private places of the hearts sweetest sorrow~ You make me sigh, oh gentle heart of the mourn. Hugs honey~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori, smiles here....thank you hon... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"but this day they were not the tears of angels it was her own tears the willows did now cry." oh you have me sighing now delicate as lace, soft as a spring breeze lovely Gentle Donna |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Kate....ah sweet lady here you are. Thank you so much hon. Have missed you.  |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely Write!  ARCTIC WIND |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your response, Donna. I am so glad there's more. I have seen the third one's title and am rushing off to go and read it! - Owl |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
You write for many of us~~ a lovely grouping of poems, Donna. I am enjoying them all. M |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
the sweet sound of sorrow echos in your words of love |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Oh Donna that is such a sweet tender poem I loved it, a big hug to you dear lady. Lindsay |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you know how much I love the willows.  Enjoying, enjoying! |
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