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Artic Wind
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0 posted 2008-06-19 02:55 PM




Tropical Sherbet Skies

As the sun slowly goes to sleep,
soft winds pick up,
--gently swaying palm trees
over the sandy shoreline
of a rolling aqua ocean.
Mermaids sing their Siren songs
as dolphins splash and dance in mid air
--calling out to their King.
The skies magically change color
and a peacefulness spreads
from the setting sun
and into the
Tropical Sherbet Skies.

ARCTIC WIND

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XGarapanX
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Antarctica
1 posted 2008-06-19 04:24 PM


This is definitely the whipped cream on top of the brownie. The sweet yummy goodness of the piece begs to be savored before the deep earthy bite. Great taste tickler.
Margherita
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2 posted 2008-06-19 06:47 PM


Ahhh, dear Michael, you paint such a wonderfully romantic scenery!

Intensely enjoyable!

Love,
Margherita

A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 2008-06-19 07:01 PM


I feel Like I am at a Baskin Robins Icecream store, my mouth is watering for so many flavors and colors, one for each color of the rainbow!

yummy!yummy for my tummy! LOL

rad802
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4 posted 2008-06-19 08:39 PM


That settles it!
I'm going to Walmart for some sherbet icecream.

Rick Delmonico

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2008-06-19 10:45 PM



Hi AW~
I really enjoyed the warm sway and breezy feel of your poem.

Very pretty~


Earth Angel
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6 posted 2008-06-20 10:54 AM


I want to taste the scrumptious sherbet sky and drink the melted sorbet waters.

Another restful, peaceful post! I love how you do these, ARCTIC.

Love you!
EA



Artic Wind
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7 posted 2008-06-20 10:57 AM


EA-

Thank you so much!

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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8 posted 2008-06-20 10:57 AM


Garapan-

Oh shucks!

Thank you so much

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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9 posted 2008-06-20 10:57 AM


Margherita!

Why thank  you



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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10 posted 2008-06-20 10:59 AM


ARH-

I am happy you got me to write a this poem!!!! and now, i cant stop lol


Thanks

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-06-20 10:59 AM


RAD-

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

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12 posted 2008-06-20 11:00 AM


Blues-

Why thank you!
I am glad you liked the YUMO treat!



ARCTIC WIND

HopeS
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13 posted 2008-06-20 03:31 PM


Beautiful scenic serenity


Hope

LindsayP
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14 posted 2008-06-21 12:18 PM



A beautiful setting with words to match,

A really good post Michael, most enjoyed.

Lindsay

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15 posted 2008-06-22 03:56 AM


Where have you been?  I have been missing you lots.

Alison

Marchmadness
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16 posted 2008-06-22 12:27 PM


"Tropical Sherbet Skies," Great title. I love it.
                     Ida

A Romantic Heart
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17 posted 2008-06-23 08:27 AM




needed a second scoop...lol!

KeyLimeSorbet
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18 posted 2008-06-24 02:58 PM


I LOVE IT!!!!
:-)
i love sunsets and sunrises that bring with them such pretty colors! Now next time i see one i might invision it as tropical sherbet and get a little hungry... :-p


Artic Wind
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19 posted 2008-07-22 12:17 PM


HopeS-

Why thank you!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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20 posted 2008-07-22 12:17 PM


Lindsay!

Thanks a bunch!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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21 posted 2008-07-22 12:18 PM


Alison-

I am here! LOL

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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22 posted 2008-07-22 12:18 PM


Marchmadness!

Thanks



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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23 posted 2008-07-22 12:19 PM


ARH~

(scoop) Enjoy LOLOLOL

ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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24 posted 2008-07-22 12:19 PM


Keylime-

I love lime ice cream the most...

I think it's the most refreshing!



ARCTIC WIND

Sunshine
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25 posted 2008-07-22 02:32 PM


How lovely!
Marge Tindal
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26 posted 2008-07-22 11:04 PM


ArticWind~

I couldn't help but want to share my dish of sherbert with you~
Hope you enjoy it even half as much as I enjoyed yours~



*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -               noles1@totcon.com

Artic Wind
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27 posted 2008-07-24 03:32 PM


Sunshine!

Thank you so much!



ARCTIC WIND

Artic Wind
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28 posted 2008-07-24 03:33 PM


Marge Tindal!


WOW! That was a tastefully Lovely touching Poem! LOL

Thank you for sharing your lovely poem with me!

And thanks for the kind Words!



ARCTIC WIND

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