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The Essentia Of You
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The Essentia Of You |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 It was a sky much like tonight’s when I suddenly realized that there was no true measure of my adoration, for you Standing on the crest of evermore looking up at the glimmer of perpetuum, to only realize that even this, vast breadth of lone and deepness, of interval and occasion, could still, not hold all of the fondness that I have, for you As not even the sheer brilliance of ageless stars can compare to the shimmering quintessence, of beauty, of you, held softly, within your, eyes within, your, essentia How many nights I spent falling into your eyes, swimming throughout your spirit In hopes that I could feel the kiss, of your loving heart How many years I’ve spent, matching each star with a reason for my affection for you, to only run out, of stars And yet, it was only through feelings expressed and longing want, of thoughts undressed that I ever really knew you Those very special words, and your portrait of light that changed like seasons do, With the timeless beauty of sea breeze, and aura, that croons crystal azure, the melody, the memories, the bird in my sky, that will always, be you Yes not ever, can I forget that one forsaken night, that one misplaced eve of wandering breeze that I first realized these feelings for you It was the wind that panted, like beguiled harlots through stiffened branches, and tight bushes As arms of tired fog too dreary to stay aloft laid with me as I dreamt of you my prayer, my story, collapsed in time my pain, and all that is my love, and glory Deep within the bosom of your soul from which my quill is dipped, is your, essence, your muse, your ink from which, I scribe The feelings missed Onto my heart, my coveting, my thirst, for you Taste the words that lay between the lines not written, nor spoken That have waited so long to be defined They are the ones that belong, to you The muffled moans pink on pillows with eyes clinched shut and nails buried in back of poems flesh That illuminate, that flavor, polished swords and cups of firm milk that runneth over As the sweet cachet that behests and conveys, The humility of soft gloves upon your hands, That write the tales that reach and touch so far away to me You’re my dusk, of sweet merlot and, juicy peaches Golden ripe beams, of warmth that lengthens shadows, and tightens, grape skins, bursting with life I am soft rain rinsing through your hair I am fingers, of wind brushing through your tassels I am passions bite soft, on your mouth I am the soothing ice cube dripping on your swollen lips You are my fire, and, my light, and the dreams, that I seek You are the essence of my sighs, as I am the tear, upon, your cheek Freedom of expression is our, write. [This message has been edited by Richy (06-29-2008 06:23 PM).] |
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Moonkist Member
since 2006-09-29
Posts 197Pennsylvania |
This was incredibly beautiful and romantic... I'm speechless! /Peace to you, Helen "Ah! my Be-loved, fill the cup that clears |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Richy, I know that you and I are friends, but I think I would like to be a "dear" friend after reading this breath-stealing, heart-palpitating, spine-tingling piece of passionate poetry! OMG! That must be one mighty dear friend for you to be inspired to write a poem such as this! I'm speechless! ~ and breathless ~ and a tad bit envious! Giving you a pat on the back ~ and a little one on your bottom! (Oh, that was rather 'cheeky' of me!  )Linda |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Peace to you too Helen. Thanks so much for stopping by, it’s so nice to meet you. Cheeky Linda Lou my sweet dear, I thought I felt a soft hand back there, plus my gluteous bootiemus started feeling hot! I’m a pretty naughty guy so feel free to give me a spanking whenever you feel it’s warranted okay lol. Thank you so much as always for your kind words my lovely friend, it was so nice to hear from you again, it seems like forever since we’ve written each other. Rich  [This message has been edited by Richy (06-28-2008 11:54 PM).] |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Passionate. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Incredible - not that's not it... Beautiful - true, but not quite right.... Awesome - well, getting there..... All of the above - It will have to do, because I do not have the words to describe your words! |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
OMG - so astounded by the words I almost forgot about the picture. I LOVE the moon... if I had a totem, the moon would be my totem. I know - an animal is usually a totem, but then again, maybe I am unusual in a couple of ways. I always love clouds and the way they move with a night time breeze, especially, when there is a moon they can cover and uncover. I'm rambling... (pink cheeks). The picture is beautiful. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Thanks for stopping in XGaranpanX, interesting name. Dear Debra, thanks so much for your two, reviews, you words gave me pink cheeks too. And that’s not from your spanking earlier Linda lol. Now are you speaking about totem poles, I’ve seen those on my visits up to Oregon to see family there. They are pretty impressive. And hey, if you’re unusual than so am I, because I love clouds, and the moon too. Thanks again my friend, you are a real joy. Rich  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Richy... this is a beautiful gifting to your beautiful friend... I hope she gets to read it...I am in awe of your wonderful works.. truly pieces of art ... I'm wishing you sunshine and smiles and lots of lovely moonlight nights to share with her... love RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Ringo 
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Wow. What would you attempt to do...if you knew you could not fail?. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Truly truly, passionate, filled with such love, emotion, devotion, ...finally I am at a loss of words...lol..me a writer and poet at a loss for words..a first..lol Well, she is a very blessed,  and loved person, to have your words adorn her soul...like precious jewels...in a crown around her head.This poem is my favorite of yours.... so powerful, and the passion is dripping from my computer....WOW! talk about inspiration.... I have been having thunderstorms my way...so I go cut off earlier...but I am back!  Hug and Kisses~ARH  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Your poem is endearing and your inspiration is "heavenly". [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (06-29-2008 06:31 PM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Richy~ Totally *sighable* and so I shall~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Good gracious! Dear Richy, what a wonderful offering! It reminds me of the reason why I missed you when you were gone for so long ... Breathtaking, yes! And you know what? I want to get lost among the stars and write a cosmic love poem ...  ... that's the energy your poem emits, it is contagious.The picture is equally awesome! Love and joy, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
This is THE most beautiful love poem I have ever read in 62½ years(and I am including Shakespeare and all his mates!) - even more beautiful than your Without Words - and I didn't think that you could better that one. It just breaks my heart that you are not with her. I can't understand that any woman could possibly resist you for 2 seconds, no matter what you have done to her or to anyone else - even if you are a jewel thief, a bigamist, a con artist, or a mass murderer or anything else bad (all of which I am sure you are not!  ), you could turn anything around with your exquisitely sensitive gentle words. I have just realised this instant the answer to Zimbabwe's problems. If you spoke to Robert Mugabe (but not in the form of a love poem, of course), I am sure you could make that Hitlerian lunatic give up the killings, attacks, terrorism and his idiotic tyranny and let Morgan Tsvangorai take over. I suppose that should be a joke, but, just picturing you talking to him, I simply can't imagine him not being totally swayed by your words with immediate effect. I didn't mean to take away from the mood of your beautiful poem, but that thought just came to me. I don't know the circumstances, of course, and don't want to interfere (says she interfering), but I really think you should contact her again (unless of course she is married, but I doubt that is the case after what you shared). Perhaps you don't realise (IN SPITE OF ALL OF US TELLING YOU ALL THE TIME!) the power of your words. Sorry about the interfering (actually, on second thoughts and to be introspectively honest, I am not sorry - just hoping you won't feel that I have intruded). - Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"not even the sheer brilliance of ageless stars can compare to the shimmering quintessence" ohhh, now you're playing with some pretty words! Richy, this one will find a cozy spot in my library, under the heading ~Love & Romanticism~ You've outdone yourself, mon ami(go). |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Stunning write |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Stunning, passionate, sensual... I could go on! Love this! miscellanea |
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