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rad802
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since 2008-04-19
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KY U.S.A.

0 posted 2008-06-27 07:24 PM



For every truth there are two lies to hide it.
For every absolute two variables disguise it.
For every good idea two total failures hold it down.
For every path that's clear, the overgrowth lies all around.

Lend me your wings and I'll give you the sky.
Send me your words. Will they teach me to cry?
Shower my emotions with tips of your hair.
And don't forget your love. Please give me your love.

For every smile there are two tears to end it.
For every deed you've done two idle days amend it.
For everything you own, two thieves will come to haul it off.
For every love you've know, their memories will just get lost.

When your destiny steps from out of the shadows.
And your legacy is gaged and bound.
Remember me I'll be your reason,
I'll be your treason, I'll be around.

Lend me your wings and I'll give you the sky.
Send me your words. Will they teach me to cry?
Shower my emotions with tips of your hair.
And most of all your love. Please give me your love.

I don't call out to the night. It may be listening.
I don't hold on to dreams because I'll choke them dead.
I don't wander in the wilderness. At least not lately.
I don't remember when I was more easily led.

work in progress..

Rick Delmonico

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Topheth
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since 2001-09-08
Posts 297
Texas
1 posted 2008-06-27 07:33 PM


I find fun in what/how you write... looking forward to more.
OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-06-28 10:11 AM


Enjoyed this immensely.

- Owl

marcel
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 660
az, usa
3 posted 2008-06-29 12:17 PM


a thinker's write...with just the right music, this could be a song.....
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