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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2008-06-28 08:30 PM


      Endings

as the twilight-bell of
  life
sounds…all too clearly…  
memories of Love
  remain fresh
as a Spring breeze
or the Summer dawn!

I WOULD HUMBLY RECOMMEND:

"Even In Waukegan":

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-06-28 09:04 PM


Secondhanddreampoet,

Nice poem.  I'm there doing that.

Bobby

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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2 posted 2008-06-28 11:37 PM


Incredible poetry.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
3 posted 2008-06-29 01:38 AM


Your words say a lot with melancholy and art. enjoyed it.

  yann

ArtSolstice
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since 2007-03-18
Posts 498

4 posted 2008-06-29 10:56 AM


To this poem, I'd post the same reply as to Compass of Love. It is fine, beautiful work, Poet. Thank you for directing readers to Even in Waukegan, which I also enjoyed. Both are now on my queue of new favorites.
ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
5 posted 2008-06-29 12:21 PM


A keeper, in thought and read.
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
6 posted 2008-06-29 12:51 PM


It's a very good thing that dreams die hard, and the memories of love never fade.
They are keepers to treasure,  forever and a day, and always.

So eloquently put, and very beautiful,  this~  

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
7 posted 2008-06-30 10:25 AM


So soft, and beautiful!
serenity blaze
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8 posted 2008-06-30 11:24 AM


I think it was Orson Welles who said something about (I paraphrase) that the key to a happy ending was knowing when to stop telling the story.

And you're very good at that m'friend.

Always brevity and to the point.


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