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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569
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 Other people see her and always comment on her eyes Blue and green with long eyelashes takes them by surprise But she doesn't see what they see her reflection makes her sigh Other people see her and always comment on her hair Lush and wavy, golden brown and hanging down to there But she doesn't see what they see and she wonders why they stare Other people see her and comment on her frame She looks like 20 years ago her body stayed the same But she doesn't see what they see her body's full of pain |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo TinaTrivett, This is well done, I like it loads, and hope she feels better soon. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Truly interesting. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I hope she sees herself before it's too. late and realizes how lucky she is. Ida |
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FastForward Member
since 2008-06-29
Posts 66 |
Twenty years ago, I complained of ill-mannered thighs. I saw a picture of me from twenty years ago. What was I thinking? I like this poem. It's sad, but true. We fail to see so often what others do....until the view is distorted. |
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