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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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0 posted 2008-06-26 05:44 AM



Moving softly
as do the strains of a Stradivarius
playing some midnight symphony of
orchestrated strings
reverberating through
my very core,


each chord plays my senses
the notes,


echoing


into the depths
of a sacred desire
that trembles me


until comes the rise
and fall


of crescendos

as we are lulled
into a tender hush
of two souls entwined
within this rhapsody


of love.

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
1 posted 2008-06-26 11:17 AM


Love the music of your words~beautiful!
OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
2 posted 2008-06-26 02:31 PM


Lovely, Donna!

- Owl

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
3 posted 2008-06-26 02:57 PM


into the depths
of a sacred desire
that trembles me


until comes the rise
and fall


of crescendos

~*~

this is an mmmmmmmmm...good.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435
Antarctica
4 posted 2008-06-26 04:54 PM


Ahhh! Soul food!

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
5 posted 2008-06-26 06:26 PM


Just perfect, dear Donna!

Sacred tunes indeed.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

6 posted 2008-06-27 05:38 AM


Thank you all so much for touching this one with your kindness.  Peace to poetry land.  Hugs.  ~D
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
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Ohio
7 posted 2008-06-27 06:58 AM


your words and the music are in harmonic bliss here
felt it very much

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

8 posted 2008-06-27 03:30 PM


Beautiful!

Eric

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
9 posted 2008-06-29 01:44 AM


This is such a lovely waltz of words that flows with true grace.

A true composer you are, Gentle One~

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