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Open Poetry #42

simple touch of it

Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2008-05-29 01:32 AM

simple, subtle
flowing
a picture
begins in
my mind
racing
as I follow
your body.
a small
curve
graceful in
nature
absolute passion
begins to
find the
pleasure of skin.
such small
immediate
heat
radiating
from your
eyes to
meet my
lips with yours.

Ray Sharpe
Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 112
Tenerife

1 posted 2008-05-29 01:53 AM

What lovely ,simple yet intense words.....a wonderful picture forms in my mind after reading it!

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

2 posted 2008-06-26 02:14 PM

Beautiful.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-06-28 03:37 AM

Nice writing...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

4 posted 2008-06-29 02:32 AM

Michael.. I like this!

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2008-06-29 02:45 AM

I like Your mind....

very seductive and sensual!

~ARH

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