Open Poetry #42 |
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Sum Days |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
Sum Days Some days just pass you by, Along with not much care. A summer breeze, a time of ease, An emptiness to share. Adding up the sumtimes thoughts, Those too far of touch. Summer nights the mind rewrites In quiet times of such. The silent warmth of summer sun In swinging to and fro, Lets old refrain to feel again The sum of long ago. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a warm and gentle feeling this gave me, like being lazily 'suspended' in mid-air while flying high on the swing-set when I was 7 years old! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks, I was spending yesterday summing up my past years~~ in picture and thought. Just another year gone by ![]() M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A lovely little poem that was a delight to read. Very well done. much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Happy belated BIRTHDAY WISHES, dear Maureen! It looks like it was a serene day, for that's the feeling I perceive reading your beautiful words. But then I do wish you to have lots of joy filled days in the new year of life. May you be permeated with new enthusiasm, as the challenges of life find solutions. Love and hugs. Margherita ![]() ![]() |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
It is grand to see you gracing these fine blue pages again with your 'penning'!, lovely Ms. M.! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Beautiful. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Lindsay, and Margherita ( yes another year to start and hopefully more enjoyable ![]() Bruce it's always nice to see you here. School has ended and I shall have more time to read and respond and maybe even write a little. Thank you. XGarapanX, thank you for stopping by, I appreciate it. M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed your poetic and Beautiful words that you are sharing Nakdthoughts ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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