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Open Poetry #42

Color-Filled Emotions

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

0 posted 2008-06-27 11:40 PM

Smeared, black disgust written across my face
Oh, how quickly it can darken a room
A grave expression that liquefies all the rest
Leaving my absent mind in complete doom

Depression slowly leaking blue into my heart
Silences the awoken, bright spirit
Guiding me back to the very start
Where a new, evil emotion shall begin

Darkness consuming me deeply
While the light fights for me to be freed
I lay, motionless on this dirt ground
How could you leave me here to bleed?

[This message has been edited by ILoveTheRain (06-28-2008 12:53 AM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-28 08:05 AM

Very emotional write, very well done!

The light will win over the darkness, rest assured.

Love and healing hugs.
Margherita

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2008-06-28 01:56 PM

clever and well thought-out. i enjoyed reading how the different colours relate to the title. i will be curious to know what you meant by "the very start"

ILoveTheRain
Member

since 2008-03-02

Posts 157
GA

3 posted 2008-06-28 10:58 PM

Thank you Margherita, I'm sure the light will win over darkness.

Kaile, I'm glad you enjoyed it. What I meant by "Back to the very start" is that it means I'm starting all over again with the depression after it has been healing.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

4 posted 2008-06-29 12:57 PM

thanks for the explanation and sorry to hear. hope life is better now

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

5 posted 2008-06-29 05:04 PM

Ah, we tortured artist types. 'Tis the pressure that squeezes out the beauty in us. Painful though.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

6 posted 2008-06-29 10:05 PM

That was a very sad poem my dear but if you

keep up that lovely smile I'm sure you will

soon meet someone else who won't leave you

there to bleed. Good luck and keep the chin

up. Love Lindsay

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